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Pure Hearts -

pure hearts shine on their own like fireflies in the dark that catch the eyes with their bright spark precious Cinquain poetry contest 3rd place

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Date: 10/17/2023 6:24:00 AM
Precious take on the cinquain form. Well written and i love the simile used here too. Pure hearts shine on their own too like fireflies in the dark. I agree. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning
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Date: 10/15/2023 5:16:00 PM
such a sweet poem, i would love to see a firefly too lol:-) hugs Jan x
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/15/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you very much...

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