Pups Land On Moon Nursery Rhyme

PUPS LAND ON MOON ~ Nursery Rhyme

Two little pups called Sam and Sue
Wanted adventure, to try something new,
Why don’t we go to the moon,
They had seen it in a cartoon
Lets go today, 
But its so far away,
Jumped into their dad’s spaceship
Its moon or bust, what a trip.
They saw strange things floating outside,
All part of their ride
We are landing said Sam
Fasten your seat belt Sue, wham!
They stepped outside, first pups
To land on moon, 
Reporters would write very soon.
Wow a space mobile,
Sam the man took the wheel,
They collected rocks and sand
To take back to Earth land,
Sue started crying, I’m scared,
I want my mummy she blared.
Back on the spaceship they climbed
So well timed,
They arrived with a bump
And a loud thump!
Their mummy and daddy gave them a hug,
And dad gave Sam’s ear a tug.
Don’t ever do that in a hurry
Again, you had us in such a flurry,
They were sorry and promised to be good,
And slept as two pups should, 
Mum put on their night light, 
Kissed them, and tucked them in tight!


Contest entry : Nursery Rhyme Contest
Sponsor; Eve Roper
Date: 2021/03/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/30/2021 2:51:00 PM
This is a fav... You know how much I love moon, and how much I fancy a trip to the moon... What a wonderful write... Truly Loved it from start to end.. Stay blessed dear friend. Hugs
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Date: 4/5/2021 12:08:00 PM
Such a cute write, and it deserved recognition in the contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2021 9:55:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … a delightful fairy tale that will surely delight a child Jennifer. Did they check to see if there were any bones buried there - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:35:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, dear sis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank-you Sunshine Smile my dear friend. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 3/11/2021 5:19:00 PM
Those pups are so cute. I think that when they have kids, they'll be named Moonbeam and Moonlight! Adorable, Jennifer. Congrats on your win in Eve's contest. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:10:00 AM
Gershon, thank-you for such a lovely comment, I really needed it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 3/11/2021 2:55:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations Jennifer, this wonderful nursery rhyme so deserved the win ~ Belle
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:55:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2021 12:23:00 PM
awww, how lovely
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Date: 3/10/2021 11:34:00 AM
Absolutely darling! So well done. You may have to write a bunch of these and become the "next Mother Goose".
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Date: 3/9/2021 8:59:00 PM
What a fun adventure, we used to have a dog named Sam (but we called him Sammy) and our other one was called Sadie - wish I could have gone to the moon with sam and sue :)
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Date: 3/9/2021 12:28:00 PM
Greatly enjoyed this one Jennifer, it flows along so well making it a lovely story to tell. Hope all well with you today It's late evening and rain is lashing down. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:45:00 AM
- An enchantingly sweet story, dear Jenny - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2021 10:26:00 AM
What a cute story that would be enjoyed by many children, Jennifer! I can picture it so well through your descriptions. I'm glad the pups made it home safely! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:57:00 AM
That’s absolutely lovely Jennifer, children will love it for sure. A super nursery rhyme... Belle
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:39:00 AM
You should have gone with them. You would be famous.
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:30:00 AM
Great nursery rhyme Jennifer, you write these so well. Tom
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:23:00 AM
WoW! Jennifer, I really enjoyed your entry for the contest. It was quite the adventure. And so fitting for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend from across the pond:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:29:00 AM
Alexis my dear friend thank-you, have been a little scarce and will for a while longer - hubby was in hospital for 5 days, but is coming home tomorrow. Am very excited. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 3/9/2021 9:11:00 AM
absolutely charming Jennifer what a delightful rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/15/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thank you Jan and congrats to you also my friend. Hubby was in ICU for a major op. for 5 days,so have been scarce and will be for another week or so. a charming comment thank-you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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