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Puppy Love Is Like a Carnival Micropoetry Ain'T That Tweet

puppy love is like carnival magic and amazing rides ferris wheels and carousel horses on the merry-go-round pushing, shoving, and holding hands stomach- twisting inside out cotton candy, caramel apples, with music in the background everlasting love initials carved on a tree lasting impression © By 7/30/2015 Syllables Per Line: 15 15 15 15 0 0 5 7 5 Quatrain & Haiku Contest Name: Micropoetry ain't that tweet Sponsor: Casarah Nance

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2015 9:33:00 PM

I'm enjoying finally seeing this one Congrats for your win.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/8/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thank you sweet friend, Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2015 2:57:00 PM

((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2015 8:19:00 AM

I really enjoyed the ride. Congratulations.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Rick, for the congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

James Inman

Date: 8/7/2015 8:19:00 AM

Eve, lovely poem and wonderful form.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, James for the wonderful support. Hugs dear friend Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2015 4:37:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Jan, for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/7/2015 1:08:00 AM

My good lady agrees with you that puppy love is like a fairground ride, Eve- but in her case I make her sick...... congrats, Viv x

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Viv, for the congratulations. I'm sorry you made her sick are you sure it wasn't the ferris wheel. . Hugs dear friend Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/7/2015 12:15:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:26:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:23:00 AM

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/7/2015 12:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Eve! Very beautiful romantic write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love and a 7! Pandita

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Pandita, for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

Wonderfully written, it went of the character count for the contest but deserves to be read!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/6/2015 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Cas, I am tickled that you read an placed me means a lot to me. Hugs Eve

David Fisher

Date: 8/3/2015 8:23:00 PM

This is wonderfully written, Eve. Certainly brings us back to a great time in our lives.

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 5:10:00 PM

I really like these, they are so cute....and with that there can be no dispute....your words reveal so many fail to see....and that is that the details are were the greatest Beauties be....;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2015 4:18:00 PM

Ahh!! A carnival ride simile..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 7/31/2015 3:41:00 PM

Eve, you did it great for the contest, wonderful memories of the carnivals of my childhood 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, puppy love

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/31/2015 11:20:00 AM

I am captured by the images you so skillfully developed, and the beauty of your words move me. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/31/2015 5:33:00 AM

Amazingly beautiful Eve! Gl in contest! Sure to fly high!

Eve Roper
Date: 7/31/2015 9:55:00 AM

Thank you , Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for your support and inspiration. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2015 4:40:00 AM

this is really cute Eve love the imagery - i think Cas will really like this:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 7/31/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jan, for your compliment and inspiration hugs Eve

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/31/2015 3:21:00 AM

I visited the Carnival of ever lasting love. It was cold there in the country of Carnival, but I found your white glove Lost among cotton candy, caramel apples, with music in the background. So I got round and round calling the sound so sweet.So sweet...

Eve Roper
Date: 7/31/2015 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Ovidiu, for your compliment I might change my title I love your interpretation," A Carnival of Ever Lasting Love" thank you for the inspiration hugs Eve