Eve Roper Poet Quatrain

Puppy Love Is Like a Carnival Micropoetry Ain'T That Tweet

puppy love is like carnival magic and amazing rides
ferris wheels and carousel horses on the merry-go-round
pushing, shoving, and holding hands stomach- twisting inside out 
cotton candy, caramel apples, with music in the background

 
everlasting love
initials carved on a tree
lasting impression


© By 7/30/2015



Syllables Per Line: 15 15 15 15 0 0 5 7 5  Quatrain & Haiku

Contest Name: Micropoetry ain't that tweet 
Sponsor: Casarah Nance

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Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 9:33 PM I'm enjoying finally seeing this one Congrats for your win. Eve Roper August 8, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thank you sweet friend, Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2015 at 2:57 PM ((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 5:58 PM Thank you, Sara, Hugs Eve

James Inman August 7, 2015 at 8:19 AM Eve, lovely poem and wonderful form. Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:21 AM Thank you, James for the wonderful support. Hugs dear friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2015 at 8:19 AM I really enjoyed the ride. Congratulations. Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:21 AM Thank you, Rick, for the congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:37 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM Thank you, Jan, for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Viv Wigley August 7, 2015 at 1:08 AM My good lady agrees with you that puppy love is like a fairground ride, Eve- but in her case I make her sick...... congrats, Viv x Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you, Viv, for the congratulations. I'm sorry you made her sick are you sure it wasn't the ferris wheel. . Hugs dear friend Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 7, 2015 at 12:15 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Eve! Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:26 AM Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:23 AM

Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2015 at 12:04 AM Congratulations on your win, Eve! Very beautiful romantic write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love and a 7! Pandita Eve Roper August 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM Thank you, Pandita, for the wonderful support and congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Casarah Nance August 6, 2015 at 8:15 PM Wonderfully written, it went of the character count for the contest but deserves to be read! Eve Roper August 6, 2015 at 9:18 PM Thank you, Cas, I am tickled that you read an placed me means a lot to me. Hugs Eve

David Fisher August 3, 2015 at 8:23 PM This is wonderfully written, Eve. Certainly brings us back to a great time in our lives.

Eric Boddie July 31, 2015 at 5:10 PM I really like these, they are so cute....and with that there can be no dispute....your words reveal so many fail to see....and that is that the details are were the greatest Beauties be....;)

Sara Kendrick July 31, 2015 at 4:18 PM Ahh!! A carnival ride simile..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara

Constance La France July 31, 2015 at 3:41 PM Eve, you did it great for the contest, wonderful memories of the carnivals of my childhood 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, puppy love

Emile Pinet July 31, 2015 at 11:20 AM I am captured by the images you so skillfully developed, and the beauty of your words move me. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 31, 2015 at 5:33 AM Amazingly beautiful Eve! Gl in contest! Sure to fly high! Eve Roper July 31, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thank you , Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for your support and inspiration. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison July 31, 2015 at 4:40 AM this is really cute Eve love the imagery - i think Cas will really like this:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper July 31, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Jan, for your compliment and inspiration hugs Eve

Ovidiu Bocsa July 31, 2015 at 3:21 AM I visited the Carnival of ever lasting love. It was cold there in the country of Carnival, but I found your white glove Lost among cotton candy, caramel apples, with music in the background. So I got round and round calling the sound so sweet.So sweet... Eve Roper July 31, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thank you, Ovidiu, for your compliment I might change my title I love your interpretation," A Carnival of Ever Lasting Love" thank you for the inspiration hugs Eve