Puppy Love Child's Ad

For Sale: Six puppies that will pee on you,
& tongue-lick your face with slobbery wet kisses.
You wouldn't wanna buy my puppies would you?



For micro poetry, ain't that sweet contest.
Casarah Nance, Sponsor
7-31-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Oh, I did grin - delightful ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:23 PM
glad you made the top ten!! Congratulations.
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Thanks, Andrea for your congrats. I'm finding that each contest is a learning experience.
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:50 PM
((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Oh, Sara, it's so good of you to stop by with the puppy congrats. Thanks, Hugs, Darlene
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Very sweet, you must be sold out. Congrats.
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:12 AM
I'll put you down for next year, Richard. Thanks for reading.
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Honesty and innocence. Love it, Darlene. I don't think she wants to sell any of them.
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:29 AM
How right you are! But mom and dad do. Thanks for reading.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:31 AM
cute write Darlene many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Thanks, Jan, and a congrats shout out to you, too!
Wigley Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Darlene, if you hadn't mentioned puppies, you could have been describing me. Congrats, Viv x
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Oh, you're funny, Viv! Thanks for reading and for the congrats.
Y. Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Darlene, l enjoyed reading piece. How many puppies did you sale?Conngratulations on your win:-)
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:34 AM
# 5th place, so I guess I sold 5 and the little child that wrote the Ad got to keep one of his puppies after all. Thanks for the congrats .
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning sweet write Darlene!
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:40 AM
I sometimes enjoy writing from a child's eye view. So I guess that helped me make the winning list, Dr. Upma. Thanks for reading me.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Darlene! Very clever write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:42 AM
Yes, Pandita! that's what it's all about. Thank you for liking my poem and for the congrats.
Nance Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:07 PM
What a truthful and tweet-erific ad, who could say no to that? I like it! Grats on your placement;)
Gifford Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Casarah, for reading and for the congrats. And congrats to you on your other contest wins. ~~Darlene
Hunjeri Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:50 PM
With that ad, id love to buy your puppies :-) all the best Darlene
Gifford Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Thanks, friend! and I enjoyed your poem as well. I've read so many great entries, that this little ad fades by comparison. But anyway, I hope I make the list. I keep trying and I do learn something from reading the winning poems and learning what the different sponsors like. ~~Darlene
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:30 AM
Darlene, weeeeee I don't know if my entry to Cassies contest is okei.. :D! I thought of something else but certainly this is a cute sweet little poem. Happy week!~~Olive ELoisa =')
Gifford Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 4:08 AM
Hi, Olive, variety is the spice of life. So I'm sure your entry will do just fine. I'm hoping for the best for you. And thanks for liking mine. ~~Darlene
Devnath  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Very sweet ad poem on puppy. Sellers have nice experience about them so ad is given nicely. Wish your Happy friendship day to you my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
Gifford Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Thank you, bl, for liking my poem about this child's reluctant ad. The puppies must go and his heart goes with them! And happy friendship day to you, also. Blessings, ~~~Darlene
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Ummmm, let me think about that one... SHWEET!!!
Gifford Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Thinking about the ad or the poem? Is it all right? SHWEET! makes me believe that you like it. I hope so.! Anyway thanks for reading. ~~Darlene
La France Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:18 AM
Darlene, oh very good selling points, is this not why we want puppies 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Gifford Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Exactly, BW, parent's want puppies gone. But not this child who is hanging on. ~~Darlene
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