Puppies

Puppies go waddling In the grass, flowers for hours Fall exhausted, sleep

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 5:18:00 AM

zzzzzzzzzz Pretty piece Sara.. As always...RdP

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2009 7:49:00 AM

Have a beautiful weekend and thank you for posting your awesome poetry here for us to read Sara. Love,Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/27/2009 6:09:00 PM

cute

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2009 4:58:00 AM

Puppies are so adorable and I could just see them running around in the grass and falling exhausted...such visualization here.. lovely haiku to start my day.. I have a special affection for all animals but especially puppies... thankxxx for sharing today and for commenting on my poetry... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"