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Punch Buggy Drunk

Zero to a hundred Smoke between the ears An amygdala doing donuts Simply changing gears *punch-drunk: Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy Punch Buggy: a game consisting of punching a person when a VW Beetle is seen

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Date: 11/2/2019 6:47:00 PM
Ouch. Sounds painful. I think that I have been there once or twice. But I dare not say for sure. Great words... Ann
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/3/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Ann :))) The brain is so fascinating. I am finding that understanding is healing, for both the brain and the mind. Hugs, xomo
Date: 10/31/2019 6:41:00 AM
Hi, Maureen. Interesting write here. I went through some of the comments as well. I've never played that game, but I do enjoyed developing new pathways in the mind!!! Neuroplasticity is awesome!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2019 7:58:00 AM
Hello Lovely! You have not missed much, tis a silly game. Neuroplasticity however...!!! Thank goodness for that. Warm hugs, xomo!
Date: 10/30/2019 8:31:00 AM
This is a wild ride! Love the punch buggy game! I oft wanted to pass a Volkswagon lot filled with colorful beetles...giggle!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/30/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Kim. My dream car ;), a 'lil old ragtop convertible please...
Date: 10/29/2019 7:24:00 AM
OMG, I haven't played that game in years. Thanks for the memory...Love this Maureen. Hugs Charlie
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/29/2019 7:36:00 AM
Giggles, nowadays the bugs are far and few between, hopefully you have a shoulder to pound on ;), Hugs! xomo
Date: 10/23/2019 9:52:00 PM
Oh, this is goooooood. Here's to a functional amygdala, however!!! (Seriously! -- I used to be a high school psychology teacher, even though I taught myself the subject). Great write, my friend. Smiles, Gershon
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/24/2019 7:07:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Dismantling the beast, piece by piece. The mind is the brain, and there is real power in mind over matter, as the science of gratefulness can attest. I count my blessings, like lovely friends like you. xomo
Date: 10/23/2019 6:59:00 PM
Well i'm learning, everyday i'm learning, Thanks Maureen, love the poetry as well as the point of it..
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/24/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Harry! You're never too old to grow your brain. (thank goodness) ;), ...writing poetry helps. xomo!
Date: 10/23/2019 11:02:00 AM
Maureen, I'm back for another punch in the amygdala. What a gift. -Richard
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/26/2019 12:06:00 AM
Then that is my word too. Here's to many days of photobiomodulation for all. After all, it rings as poetry to my deafened ear. -Richard
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:43:00 PM
Heh ;), Thank you my friend! I'm looking into shining a light on my amygdala, literally, my new favourite word is photobiomodulation. xomo!
Date: 10/22/2019 9:55:00 PM
Maureen, Love or hate it's Slug Bug time. -Richard
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:43:00 PM
Giggles ;D,
Date: 10/22/2019 8:15:00 PM
This just flowed right mo! Perfection!;)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! Kinda wrote itself ;), xomo!
Date: 10/22/2019 10:36:00 AM
Aging but still learning lol! To be honest I had to look up 'amygdala' before grasping the gist of this poem...it was easy to change gears then:) Regards // paul
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:46:00 PM
That's neuroplasticity in action! Thank you Paul :))) xomo!
Date: 10/22/2019 8:40:00 AM
Brings back memories. Don’t forget to say “No punch backs!”
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:48:00 PM
Totally! ;D, hugs~ xomo!
Date: 10/22/2019 6:19:00 AM
Great work!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Patti! xomo
Date: 10/21/2019 7:59:00 PM
It sounds like a silly game to me, but you did a great job in narrating it, Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Pixie, xomo!
Date: 10/21/2019 7:52:00 PM
I love all the convoluted ways the layers of your poem can be interpreted, Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Line! I try ;), xomo
Date: 10/21/2019 7:43:00 PM
Hahaha I remember the punch buggy game. Since we traveled round my younger years we did the States Plates game, but that is so much tamer hahaha. I love this Maureen. You can sure strip some gears here lol.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:53:00 PM
...one you never really grow out of, speaking for myself of course. I like your game. ;), xomo!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/22/2019 8:58:00 AM
Here at home my son and I have a you get a punch in the arm if you say impossible. You must immediately change that word to improbable lol.
Date: 10/21/2019 6:26:00 PM
Yep Maureen, I often here the clanking of gears in my old brain. Good stuff!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:54:00 PM
I'm oiling it, still gunk to work through ;), Thank you! xomo
Date: 10/21/2019 1:52:00 PM
doing donuts - great visual! This is a cool one:)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Michelle! I've quit doughnuts, donuts next! ;), Hugs ~xomo
Date: 10/21/2019 12:41:00 PM
Ok, I'll admit it. I had to look up amygdala. Really cool my friend. I already knew what punch drunk was. : )
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/21/2019 12:51:00 PM
Amygdala is what my honey says when I start spinning out of control, it really helps. 0 to a 100 goes the other way too. Thank you dear. No punch backs. ;),

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