Pumpkins

Pumpkins set up on high
Pretty leaves are dancing
Paints coming in orange
Painting funny faces
Patty loves the fun look
Pies will make big smiles shine
Priceless fun day for all.
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Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 5:49 PM
A FUN poem, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to be A FUN poem. It was a fun/joy to write. What a great time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
Kauffman Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win with this poems that celebrates the rollicking fun of pumpkin fields, pumpkin pies and dancing leaves. So enjoyed it! Harvest blessings to you! Just an FYI - I can't grow zucchini but I can grow pumpkins!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write.  WOW!!! You can grow pumpkins??? You are so lucky. Guess you have lots of pumpkin pies, cookies, bread, soup, muffins. I am coming to your place to eat. Hahaha!!! You can always buy zucchini for cooking or for bread... I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
George Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Halloween cannot be disassociated with pumpkins and October is the month we get a bumper yield of pumpkins. Enjoyed your pumpkin poem. Congratulations on your win, dear Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write.  WOW!!! You grow pumpkins??? You are so lucky. Guess you have lots of pumpkin pies, cookies, bread, soup, muffins. I am coming to your place to eat. Hahaha!!! I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
May Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Nicely done Paula, Congrats on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to Nicely done. I love warm pumpkin pie. It was a joy to write. I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
Buehler Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 11:55 AM
A lovely, happy and fun poem, Paula! Congratulations on your win. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to be A lovely, happy and fun poem. It was fun to write. I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
Richards Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 11:21 AM
Well done, Paula. I have tried to make pumpkin pie, but mine came out lumpy. It always looks so good in the pictures.
Richards Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 11:40 AM
Thanks for the tip, Paula. I never thought of putting it in a bender. It makes sense.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write. Can pumpkins make easy pies. Fresh pumpkin needs to be mashed, like forever or put in a machine to get all the lumps out. You can always just buy them. The last few years, I have been buying them. I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 7:02 AM
"5 Place" Pumpkins~Date Written:10/15 2024
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:44 PM
A cute fun poem, Paula. P word like your name! Congrats and thanks for submitting to my contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to be A cute fun poem. It was fun to write for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for the placement. I love this time of the year... Have a fun autumn day...............
Jones Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 12:36 PM
What a fun write! I admire your skill and diversity! I don’t know how to write in this form!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 9:49 AM
Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" to be a fun write. Pleiades is new to me. Only done a couple of them. I find they take more thought/time to do. Good luck if you try one....  Have a fun autumn day.........
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Love the Poetry form Paula your words captured Pumpkins to a tee. Thanks for sharing hugs blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love my "Pumpkin" write/form. It was fun to write. Hugs... Have a fun autumn day............
Rodgers Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Dear Paula, What an enjoyable romp with your poetic pumpkin words. It fits the season and month like a puzzle piece. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write. It is a pretty/fun time of the year. I love the cooler day. Oh yes, just like a puzzle piece between summer/winter. Have a fun autumn day.........
Gasun Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Awesome imagery my dear poet friend Paula. I can imagine a feast of orange pumpkins added with pretty leaves, pies and others. Everyone will be filled with shining smiles for sure. I love and enjoyed this a lot my dearest poet friend. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Have a great day in sunshine! Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to have Awesome imagery. I love this time of the year. Hugs... Have a fun autumn day.........
Greenhough Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:43 PM
Celebration that seeps from the edges of this poem. Enjoy Halloween.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:42 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write. It is a fun time of the year... Have a fun autumn day.........
Sands Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Oh, so sweet and fun Paula. Thanks for sharing :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Pumpkin" write to be so sweet and fun. It was so much fun to write. It did take extra time. Hugs... Have a fun autumn day.........
Narain Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Nice one. Looking forward to the pumpkin pies!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Pumpkin" write. Oh yes, the warm pumpkin pies. They will be here very soon. Hooray!!! Have a fun autumn day.........
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Pumpkins~Date Written:10/15 2024
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