Puffs of Cotton Blowing High

Puffs of cotton blowing high,
Hiding, then revealing 
The warmth of the light,
Shadows across my face concealing
A late winter morning confused
By the finger of spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 12:31 PM
This poem describes our weather here in Johannesburg so well right now - we are entering Autumn but temperature today was 31 degrees C Our weather patterns are changing world wide confusing us and plant-life. Penned beautifully. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Very evocative, enjoyed reading this!
Wanter Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Thank you!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 12:02 PM
- Mars is a month that makes us a little confused, Sunlite :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Thank you!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 3:26 AM
"the finger of spring" would be so welcome here right now! "puff of cotton" would be welcome also. I love this poem!
Pandit Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Great imagery..the kind that makes me rush to spring.
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Sweet, Sunlite. Lovely to have thoughts about spring.
Sands Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 11:15 AM
I love this. It's beautiful Sunlite :)
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