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Puffs of Cotton Blowing High

Puffs of cotton blowing high, Hiding, then revealing The warmth of the light, Shadows across my face concealing A late winter morning confused By the finger of spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/9/2019 12:31:00 PM
This poem describes our weather here in Johannesburg so well right now - we are entering Autumn but temperature today was 31 degrees C Our weather patterns are changing world wide confusing us and plant-life. Penned beautifully. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/6/2019 11:36:00 PM
Very evocative, enjoyed reading this!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/7/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 3/6/2019 12:02:00 PM
- Mars is a month that makes us a little confused, Sunlite :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/7/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 3/6/2019 3:26:00 AM
"the finger of spring" would be so welcome here right now! "puff of cotton" would be welcome also. I love this poem!
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:04:00 PM
Great imagery..the kind that makes me rush to spring.
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Date: 3/5/2019 12:51:00 PM
Sweet, Sunlite. Lovely to have thoughts about spring.
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:15:00 AM
I love this. It's beautiful Sunlite :)
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