Puddles

yes . . i like to linger in words and the way they caress the sky in poetic array but, there are days when peace finds me, and i get lost in the simple things that most take for granted like, a pinwheel smile that somehow tickles the lonely, one spotlight dance forever cheering the soul, even the precious joy of Puddles . . a place where laughter continues to splash and where my heart, will always remain ___________________ thoughts from the heart ~ just a little scribble ~

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 3/8/2023 6:37:00 PM

Invokes thoughts of childhood springtime splashing around and galoshes and raincoats with tiny umbrellas..... do so miss when my daughter was 10yrs old! Warmly A.S.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2023 7:21:00 PM

I'm still a child at heart. :) These words reflect that. There's something about puddles that makes the heart smile. I completely understand. Thank you, A.S. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Simon King

Date: 3/13/2020 12:14:00 AM

Very simple but full of joy a great scribble

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2020 9:33:00 PM

Hi Simon, thank you for your kind words. This is a poem filled with happiness. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 1/11/2020 4:40:00 PM

oh the joy of puddle jumping... those simple things most turn their noses up at...are the dearest memories to me....

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2020 6:49:00 PM

I am happy that you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. :) Puddles are messy, but fun. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Old Buck

Date: 3/31/2019 2:10:00 PM

Brandy: You do so well in a few words. My go on for days. A picture may be better than a thousand words, especially if it didn't take a thousand words to produce it. :o) oldbuck

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/31/2019 6:33:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say about my poetry. :) Thank you Buck. Sometimes words can linger for longer, but sometimes- less can be so much more. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2019 5:47:00 PM

wow, Brandy, this is really nice writing. I love the style you used here! So good to live life in such moments.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2019 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Blessings truly are everywhere. Even in Puddles. ~ Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2019 7:48:00 AM

The child in you is there to stay, Brandy! That is why you are able to enjoy even the simplest of things in life! Your poem, as always, is a pleasure to read; your inimitable style beckons the reader with its mellow delivery. ~ Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/2/2019 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Paul. The child in me will always be. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. My style. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/22/2019 11:34:00 AM

I knew a girl once that loved the world she saw reflected in the puddles. The visual is kind of a dreamworld...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/22/2019 2:56:00 PM

:) Smart girl. Puddles hold many beautiful reflections. A place of happiness. Thank you Tobey. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 2/22/2019 7:11:00 AM

The simple pleasures and innocent comforts very well expressed. Endearing as ever, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/22/2019 2:41:00 PM

Yes, these simple moments are precious treasures. Indeed. Thank you Lawrence. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Gerald Greene

Date: 2/22/2019 7:10:00 AM

A nice light-hearted piece. I like it.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/22/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thank you Gerald. :) I am just being me, enjoying these simple moments in life. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/20/2019 8:49:00 AM

A joyful write...simple things...happiness brings...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/20/2019 6:26:00 PM

:) Thank you Arturo. Yes, there is happiness in simplicity. My best to you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 2/20/2019 4:57:00 AM

Sometimes I get get caught up in the rat race of my life and forget about the simple pleasures, thank you for the reminder my sweet friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/20/2019 6:25:00 PM

Many of us do. Life keeps us moving in different directions. It is nice to stop and linger- in a precious moment, every once and a while. :) Thank you John. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2019 9:57:00 PM

I love the first stanza of this lovely write...best wishes

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/19/2019 10:29:00 PM

Awe, thank you Joseph. :) I appreciate your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/19/2019 5:54:00 PM

Hello Brandy Nicole, puddles children play in the puddles. I use to play in the puddles. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/22/2019 12:56:00 PM

thank you Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/19/2019 7:13:00 PM

Hi Darlene, thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, children love puddles. One should enjoy even the simplest of moments. Blessings truly are everywhere. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/19/2019 3:29:00 PM

Delightful scribble! Thoroughly enjoyed :) xomo!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/19/2019 7:09:00 PM

:) Thank you Maureen. These words are from the heart. I appreciate your kindness. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2019 2:01:00 PM

A precious joy of puddles..so uniquely creative are your words! Simple things like a smile and a dance, indeed make life special. Well written poem, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/19/2019 7:06:00 PM

Rain is playfully caressing my world now!!! Will be feeling its touch all week. There is something about the water- Puddles, that just makes a heart happy. :) Thank you Vijay!! Your thoughts always bring a smile. ~ Brandy