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Pudding

Flying's not my idea of fun, hear me grumbling It's not the falling, it's the landing that's troubling The sudden stop They'd need a mop To clean up what's left which resembles pudding © Jack Ellison 2016

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Date: 1/8/2016 4:45:00 PM
Helping to feed a young un? That airplane trick works every time... But Watch out if the tyke doesn't want to eat it.... You may have to take yourselfs out in the marshmellows to get cleaned off... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/8/2016 5:02:00 PM
YUCKSIES!!! Not what I had in mind!!! LOL xoxox
Date: 1/7/2016 4:26:00 PM
If you happen to fly you should wear Depends...cover what falls out your rear end...save the cleanup guy work...he wont think yer a jerk...and a Christmas card he likely will sens
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/7/2016 7:27:00 PM
LOL I'll try to remember the Depends next time!!!
Date: 1/7/2016 7:35:00 AM
I always feel joy when I read ur work, very nice one.....hugs / / :) dalia
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
I always feel joy when I read your replies! You are a real sweetie!!! Hugs and much love, Jack xox

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