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he is on one knee
a large diamond appears-
watching from my car

5/30/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/10/2019 3:45:00 PM
congrats for the win! This one is making me wonder if you are his stalker or his mom or his best friend!!!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2019 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I envisioned myself as a stranger in a crowded place like a city park watching from my car at this unexpected event!
Date: 6/10/2019 11:10:00 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2019 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my winning placement!
Date: 6/5/2019 6:43:00 AM
How exciting! I can almost picture him all dressed up too!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 6/2/2019 10:39:00 AM
Was it a yes or a no? Nice senryu..
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/2/2019 1:55:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2019 7:39:00 AM
Great, for that is definitely a twist, --best wishes indeed Tania, Aloha William
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/31/2019 8:31:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/31/2019 3:21:00 AM
Another great entry. Well done.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/31/2019 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Victor! :)
Date: 5/30/2019 6:17:00 PM
A powerful Senryu, lovely.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thank you ML! :)
Date: 5/30/2019 5:01:00 PM
oh how lovely!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :)