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Public Proposal

he is on one knee a large diamond appears- watching from my car 5/30/19

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Date: 6/10/2019 3:45:00 PM

congrats for the win! This one is making me wonder if you are his stalker or his mom or his best friend!!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2019 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I envisioned myself as a stranger in a crowded place like a city park watching from my car at this unexpected event!

Date: 6/10/2019 11:10:00 AM

Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2019 11:40:00 AM

Thank you Constance and thank you for my winning placement!

Date: 6/5/2019 6:43:00 AM

How exciting! I can almost picture him all dressed up too!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2019 7:44:00 PM

Thank you Kim!

Date: 6/2/2019 10:39:00 AM

Was it a yes or a no? Nice senryu..

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/2/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thank you!

Date: 5/31/2019 7:39:00 AM

Great, for that is definitely a twist, --best wishes indeed Tania, Aloha William

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/31/2019 8:31:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Date: 5/30/2019 6:17:00 PM

A powerful Senryu, lovely.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 6:42:00 PM

Thank you ML! :)

Date: 5/30/2019 5:01:00 PM

oh how lovely!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Jan! :)