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Through all my changes I was a dreamer and lived a trepidation and a ruse, but when she lay bare and I between her I lived the dream in my puberty blues. In a rush of young blood in curves and curls between the sweaty bales of Percy’s barn, where tales of turgid boys and bare-arsed girls spread like the clap village rumour and yarn! With a skinful of beer hard to conceal I became a caricature of me, and when you live a lie faking it real nothing sobers you like reality. Thus I in my DTs and detox lay sorely truly fu-cked on my bed of hay. Written: April 2000

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Date: 6/29/2022 1:21:00 PM
Nothing itches like an hay day! Aloha!
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