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Psychogenic Pain

Screaming is what I heard Screaming like a flightless bird I was alone in a cell or in a room Everyday the screams came with the moon Tomorrow is a new day But I'm the same man The man who grips his pillow at night Fearing the war he must fight They say everything will get better I will oppose that in my suicide letter I need to state that I'm not that dark I'm just a man who's is searching for his heart The screams I heard were from me but its not me It was a heart that yelled just to be found A heart that was buried 6 feet under the ground Will it ever succeed to live That's one thing I can never give

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/25/2024 2:23:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Moon Flower

Date: 5/14/2016 7:22:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Mohamed. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2016 1:10:00 PM

- Hi Mohamed :) - Thanks for your first great poems, well written:) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/11/2016 11:21:00 AM

Mohamed, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.7 out of 7.........//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/11/2016 12:24:00 AM

Mohamed, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2016 8:00:00 PM

Mohamed,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/10/2016 5:43:00 PM

Mohamed, Though I have not yet mastered the form you have used, your rhyme has done enough to infuse your heartfelt message!! I offer your piece a ~7...I would take physical pain over "psychogenic pain any time!!!I speak as if I have a choice:) we don't. you have spoken volumes with your piece....I wish you nothing more than true peace..:), jill