Pssst,Pssssst,Pssssssst

as sunset burns the distant sky
awakening small things that fly
to sally forth into the night
to sniff you out and take a bite
while others like a drilling rig
not quite so small, but not real big
will puncture you and take a swig
buzz around your ears and face
while you slap at empty space
a spider spins its silky trap
in hopes it may catch fleeing prey
gift wrap it for another day
thus does the moon claim darkened sky
wherein the pesky buzzers fly.



John G. Lawless
©8.28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:12 PM
They love a swig of the sangria...Nicely panned
Mcintosh Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 11:06 PM
This is a exceptional poem and so true. I don't like bugs, but know they're a part of life... You describe them perfectly. Thank you so much for the awesome write.
Merryman Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 8:44 PM
This is so good! Spot on description of the pests of the night. Blessings, Kim
Wanter Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:04 AM
You say it so well! How miserable is the night without Deet. Do you know the purpose of mosquitos? I don't.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 8:48 AM
I've got to agree with Chris I too love the line about slapping an empty space lol - thankfully we don't get mozzies here but do get pesky wasps:-( hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 8:33 AM
You have described the pesky things that fly , so well ! :)
Green Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 8:12 AM
"while you slap at empty space" I think that line describes it perfectly. Nicely done John.
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