Pseudonym

Life, as a pseudonym,
Drags its shadow's shadow, which snarls
Itself around traffic cones and
Streetlamps, tearing at its skin
With deliberate intimacy
To alarm light witnessed
Only through strained peripheral vision.

A lace-stitched veil
Slips through sidewalk cracks,
Unisolated windows,
Cataract smooth eyes.

The flesh of the matter invades
Such as the Red Death
In living color--Vibrant
Cadavers speak the language of Love:
Mortality;

It slides over possessive nouns, sticky
As salivation,
Push and rattle and harbor themselves against
Warm, wet cavities eroded
In the backside of actualities 
Sweet Tooth.
Authentic miasma, honest illness.

Any footprints discarded in covers of dust
In which Fear has been recognized
Yield into thoughts by persuasion 
Of waves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ramage Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jenna. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 2:02 AM
Jenna belated congrats on your win...David
Richards Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Such a well-deserved winning poem, and each line a image of age stalking at the heels......wow!
Conrad Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Oh man, thanks you guys! It really means a whole bunch ^.^ I didn't expect to win at all. Oh man.
Grisetti Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:32 AM
An excellent combination of words to bring images to life. Congratulations on your win.
Beck Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:16 AM
I agree with what Nance said......the poem is a marvellous word experience....congrats and well done indeed.....Syd
Jones Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 8:55 PM
OUTSTANDING!! sticky as salivation, discarded footprints covering over the fear..... waves aren't so sticky, they're pretty wet, tho. Thank you SO MUCH, Jenna for supporting my contest and if you'd like me to mail you an Occupy Gainesville t-shirt, please soup mail me a physical mailing address. Thanks and namaste~ N
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