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Pru the Bee Keeper

There once was a keeper called Pru Who suffered from bouts of the flu, She was stung by her bees As she let out a sneeze, And turned all the honey to glue. For Gwen's contest

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/9/2012 11:12:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed your nice one. bl

David Williams

Date: 1/9/2012 7:25:00 AM

Jack congrats on your win, love this..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Sneezing Limerick" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/9/2012 6:57:00 AM

I'll never think about honey the same again, Jack. I used to like it! congrats to you on a fine limerick in this cool contest. Lots of entertainment here in this one.

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/8/2012 10:03:00 PM

Oh Jack. What are we going to do with you:) This is sooo good. Congrats

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/8/2012 7:15:00 PM

Hi Jack..how is it that KASH IS AS FAST As LIGHTENING? Oh my word!! ha ah. He beat me to the punch here to congratulate you! Here's how it went down..I judged the first 2 rounds then this evening the final judging was done at the ice cream parlor with 2 other judges. We judged on meter and content..humor scored the highest of course. I loved the image of this scene. What a hoot the bee keeper's hive must have been. Congrats on your winning write. The judging was stressful bc I wanted everyone to win first. ha ha. Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 1/8/2012 7:10:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your Win.Enjoyed your Limerick.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/29/2011 8:13:00 PM

LoL! pru to glue, lovely rhymes. good luck on the contest jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/28/2011 8:17:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Jack. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 8:54:00 PM

This is REALLY good limericking, Jack. I think you have it in the bag!!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/27/2011 8:53:00 PM

That is GREAT Jack-so funny! I love the names you come up with for your Limericks-they are so fun :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/27/2011 7:42:00 PM

Funny stuff! I read a limerick I made up once at a poetry reading and got some chuckles. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/27/2011 3:27:00 PM

Unlike Terry Malloy, this one is going to be a contender. It's going to get a shot at the title while Terry gets a one way ticket to Palookaville.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2011 2:42:00 PM

Cute one..Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by...Read like you have more to do than you can get done..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/27/2011 2:28:00 PM

Oh man, that is one of the funniest things I've heard recently! Honey to glue!! That's hilarious! Thank you for cheering me up...poor Pru! :) Awesome Work!!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/27/2011 2:13:00 PM

MMMM bee glue.