Proximity

The sun radiating a warm glow
On the Eastern horizon
Softly and slowly it is rising
Bringing joy for some and sadness
For others, all living in close
Proximity of each other

If we only knew what each life
Has to face each day, we 
Would be more compassionate
Those that face challenges in living
Due to age, illness, life stages
That bring challenges of their own

The cool crisp air is refreshing
Being outside is relaxing and inspiring
The soft chirp of birds of different species
Roosters in the distance greet a new day
Crows flying high flapping strong
Powerful wings and crawing at the same time

Duty calls my name and I must answer
Thank you Lord for another day with
Time on the porch to be refreshed
In spirit and in your love and care
Help me to let it overflow into the lives
Of others where ever I go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/6/2009 4:05:00 PM
Delightful poem Sara >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 1:24:00 PM
brilliant poem, really enjoyed this poem, congrats to you. cheers for all the comments
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:14:00 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Sara. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2009 8:55:00 AM
yep, flow on to others, it is hard at times.
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Date: 11/5/2009 11:12:00 PM
Well done Sara :)
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:48:00 AM
How true it is that we would be more compassionate if we took time to walk a mile in another person's shoes. This is very inspirational and uplifting, Sara. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2009 7:13:00 AM
The compassion in your poem is a good reminder to us all! ~ Carrie
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