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Proximity

The sun radiating a warm glow On the Eastern horizon Softly and slowly it is rising Bringing joy for some and sadness For others, all living in close Proximity of each other If we only knew what each life Has to face each day, we Would be more compassionate Those that face challenges in living Due to age, illness, life stages That bring challenges of their own The cool crisp air is refreshing Being outside is relaxing and inspiring The soft chirp of birds of different species Roosters in the distance greet a new day Crows flying high flapping strong Powerful wings and crawing at the same time Duty calls my name and I must answer Thank you Lord for another day with Time on the porch to be refreshed In spirit and in your love and care Help me to let it overflow into the lives Of others where ever I go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 4:05:00 PM
Delightful poem Sara >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 1:24:00 PM
brilliant poem, really enjoyed this poem, congrats to you. cheers for all the comments
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:14:00 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Sara. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2009 8:55:00 AM
yep, flow on to others, it is hard at times.
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Date: 11/5/2009 11:12:00 PM
Well done Sara :)
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:48:00 AM
How true it is that we would be more compassionate if we took time to walk a mile in another person's shoes. This is very inspirational and uplifting, Sara. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2009 7:13:00 AM
The compassion in your poem is a good reminder to us all! ~ Carrie
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