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Prowling the Jungle

Her tiny paws move slowly
Exploring the unholy
Many foes the kitten meets
Preying ‘neath living room seats



*March 24, 2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2018 3:37:00 PM

Love the poem the visual is adorable of the kitten.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2018 2:16:00 PM

The kitten goes where no man wants to! Like it!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/20/2017 6:07:00 PM

Nicely written. soup mail. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 4/16/2017 1:28:00 PM

aww, love this playful write xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/3/2017 12:28:00 PM

I can see the scene you have created, vividly, Carolyn! So cute! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

James Inman

Date: 4/2/2017 9:44:00 PM

A lovely write Carolyn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:46:00 PM

this is really cute, CArolyn. LOVE it. and Congrats on your sweet win.

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:29:00 PM

Carolyn congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju as a cat lover I liked this a lot ~

Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2017 3:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win Carolyn

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/29/2017 12:47:00 PM

Novel take on the jungle prompt. Nothing cuter than a kitten at play. The feline fan loved your jueju.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2017 7:22:00 AM

A very unique and creative take on the 'jungle' theme, Carolyn! I can picture this cute kitten in its environment. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2017 3:50:00 PM

- Lovely and sweet on tiny paws, Carolyn :) - Good luck in the contest ... and happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2017 2:11:00 PM

BRILLIANT take on the jungle theme and Constance will love it with the kitten theme!:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 3/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

This is cute Carolyn. I had a new kitten show up about a week ago and even though my older cat didn't appreciate him too much, he was too cute to say no to. I really enjoy watching him have fun with just about everything he comes in contact with. Your poem made me smile today.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/24/2017 2:40:00 PM

Smiles -- Be careful, Chris. Soup member Daver Austin acquired dozens of cats in much the same way and now they run the house. So glad you had a smile...

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