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Providence On Behalf of Love

Providence On Behalf Of Love I that have seen such beauty fallen beneath its gleam rejected my life’s duty to wade thus in its stream Saturating me with love bathed in moon’s reflection naught more for me to dream of drown me your affection With our true hearts united stare into love’s abyss night dreams felt unrequited are thus found with first kiss Passion’s torch does scorch the sun red molten flow in veins as we two become as one unbridled, fallen reins Sacrosanct are our love nights life’s sweet joys soar with you without your touch, nothing’s right next tryst now overdue Stoke my love and lustful sate lure me your siren song wooing whirlwind perfect fate where pulse and pleasures throng We shall meet under moonlight join true hearts in one fire kiss in love’s sweet depths all night meld into deep desire We’ll sail ‘cross life’s open seas explore each others’ shores casting caution to the breeze re-writing romance lores Love’s paradise we’ll not miss destiny sends us there living life with blushing bliss heaven for us to share Rapture’s mine, your eyes starshine your light does kiss my soul intervention our’s Divine in ecstasy extol Robert Lindley and Susan Ashley (a collaboration) _______________June 8, 2018______________ *Providence* - a manifestation of divine care or direction - My Poet’s Note: When my talented friend Robert, found and presented to me his lovely poem fragment, from long ago (the first stanza), and asked if I would be interested in writing a collaborative poem with him, I said ‘Yes’! In the moment of reading his tender words, I was inspired.. and honored and humbled, by his generous and kindhearted offer to finish this poem with him through our creative cooperation. It was my great pleasure and a tremendous poetic experience for me to create and write with Robert, a fine poet of such high caliber who just so happens to be my esteemed friend as well. Robert, you made my first collaboration a pure joy and our friendship and partnership in poetry is cherished. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Robert’s Poet’s Note: How our collaboration on this poem came to be. I had this short poem fragment from many decades ago. I saw some merit in it being completed. At first I sat down to write and finished the poem myself. Then I remembered the insight, the quality and beauty of Susan's previous collaboration with me - our sonnet duet and that sealed the deal. I decided to ask her if she would finish that old poem fragment as a collaboration with me. To my great and fortunate delight she agreed to do so. A true blessing it is for me to compose with such a kindhearted and talented poet as my dear friend most assuredly is... As it is always a pleasure to write and discuss poetry with my talented friend..

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Date: 7/5/2018 4:49:00 AM
This lovely collaboration is so romantic. It is wonderful when two can write as one! A splendid mating of the minds! : )
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Date: 6/24/2018 9:05:00 PM
a wonderful collab from two amazing poets;-)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/25/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thank you my very good friend. I am indeed very blessed to have the great friendship of and a wondrous writing partner in my writing partnership with Susan. For she truly deserves the accolades that her magnificent verses bring..
Date: 6/19/2018 6:10:00 PM
To Robert and Susan, I am very glad that I saw your mutual work here tonight. Superbly done in every respect, and my congratulations to you both on this wondrous rhyme!! Full of beauty, enchantment, and romantic flourishes. A FAVE TOO!! Here's to romance!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. Susan is a joy and wonder to compose with and her kindness is a great blessing to me. Thanks for the fav and noting this is mutual work that we both are very blessed to be able to do and present to others!
Date: 6/12/2018 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic, sensual and sexy. This is perfection my dear Robert and Susan as only you two wonderfully creative and talented poets can express. A masterpiece, I loved it and a FAVE from me.... Maria xxx and Hugs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/13/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. my immensely talented writing partner forced me to improve my own writing. Thanks very much for the kind words and the fav..
Date: 6/11/2018 1:21:00 PM
I left a comment on Susan's page, and came to yours to repeat the same praise, and lo and behold, I find another beautiful rhyme composed by you two. You have a seamless way of writing together, a testimony to your talents and humility!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/11/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poetry and comments. So true Susan is so creative and talented that we write together very well.
Date: 6/11/2018 11:03:00 AM
A love divine beyond words...only to be read in the tranquility of the soul...superbly expressed by two great poets...Bravo!...love and light my friends...^WW^
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/11/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I know that Susan and I both put our heart and soul into this new creation. She inspired me to exceed my norm and attempt to match her superb writing.
Date: 6/10/2018 5:24:00 AM
When two exceptional poets like you Robert and Susan collaborate the only outcome is an exceptional poem such as this, an absolute pleasure to read my friends and definitely a fav for me. :)))
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/10/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am honored and blessed by having such a talented writing partner and great and kind friend. She inspires me to improve my writing.
Date: 6/9/2018 12:47:00 PM
A beautiful poem and story between the both of you. The collaboration between you Robert and Susan, is a perfect fit...Congrats to the both of you for creating this masterpiece! All the Best...Charlie
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/9/2018 6:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I am truly blessed to have such a beautifully talented writing partner. One that has her own top class style.....
Date: 6/9/2018 8:29:00 AM
Rejoicing words in their festival here ... gala festival ... reading this has been a tremendous pleasure ... lovely ...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/9/2018 10:24:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Very pleased you enjoyed our collaboration. Susan made this one shine bright methinks..
Date: 6/9/2018 4:39:00 AM
You're on a pow wow...a word celebration...Lovely poem Robert...written with a lovely woman too...All the best to both
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/9/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you my good friend. Yes, Susan is truly a great and kind soul that has immense poetic talents.
Date: 6/9/2018 3:09:00 AM
This is rather romance in heaven! Only an adept poet, a soul of soaring imagination can carry a passionate reader to unique realms that of the divine! Original write, amazing world of words enfolding the finest and most sacred emotion, Love in all its beauty! A great pleasure to read, a bliss to share a heavenly journey of divine Love. Thank you so much for sharing your beauty. Stay blessed.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/9/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you my friend. You are so very kind and your comments reveal a true poet's heart and soul.
Date: 6/8/2018 10:07:00 PM
My dear friend, it was such a thrill for me to collaborate with you and finish this beautiful poem you had started so long ago. Robert, it was my wonderful privilege and a pure joy to be able to join you in presenting this creation. Thank you for a great poetic time.. Warmest wishes my good friend! ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/8/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. A wondrous blessing to find and have such a true and talented friend as you!

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