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Providence

Impregnable soil Dried roots they toil Reaching to quench their thirst Extinguish the fire Burning up higher Late summer sun is perverse Scorching the painting Left remaining The Rembrandt of spring created Panoramic colors Melt and flutter As the canvas is slowly cremated Naturally Mother Responds to recover Mindfully saving the pieces Wisely stitches together For coming cold weather A blanket to warm her cold feet with an original poem by the Poemdog Daniel Turner

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2016 5:06:00 PM

An enjoyable and worthy read, Daniel - I liked spending time with your well written perspective. Good luck in all things ... CayCay

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/5/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Cay Cay. Sometimes I go back and read some of my original poems and I can notice the change. The first ones seemed a lot simpler and almost always carried a message. The new ones, not so much.

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 1/28/2016 8:31:00 PM

That's a really beautiful piece, Daniel. I definitely see the similarities. I like yours better!

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 8:45:00 PM

Your graciousness has given me inspiration. Thank you. I'm partial to your version. It's more grown up. Humor is a good muse for me.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/17/2016 3:14:00 PM

Very nice pen Daniel! Well written piece. A7! Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:) D

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/17/2016 3:16:00 PM

Thank you again, you're too kind.

Tiffany Diaz

Date: 1/16/2016 7:15:00 PM

A blanket in which coats the land for she is mother nature, to all of which recovered through her strength to with stand.....Love Love Love!!!!!!!!!!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/16/2016 8:57:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and supporting me with your enthusiasm.