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Proud In the Sun

Since first the polished acorn lulled in loam it has borne the weight of sun The leaves it birthed are gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 11:58:00 AM
And how it does! You sure captured the mighty oak in these 3 lines, Carrie :) That last line of yours made me think how majestic it is... and thank you hugs to you for your very touching comments in my poem, thank you, it means a lot....
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Date: 3/10/2012 8:32:00 AM
The oak tree was the best tree for this kimo story, Carrie...stunning. POWERFUL. LOVE, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/10/2012 3:15:00 AM
Beautiful Kimo!Best wishes.
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