Proposal

penetration of deep blue sky? mesmerized by proposal of eyes her crush moonlit diamond plucking the harp of her knees pleasure this daunting? she nods 7/14/2021 Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula Used PS Syllable counter 577577

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/13/2021 11:06:00 AM

Congrats on this top trophy win, Kim! Do I call you GJ (Grand Jury) yet? lol... I'm lucky. Over 70 now, I don't have to worry about 'JD,' jury duty. I can go back to being a 'jd,' juvenile delinquent. (Though I've lost my original card; I think it drowned in a peanut butter jar...). Smiles, Gershon ershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2021 11:41:00 AM

I had no excuses..retired, 60…lol! We will just have to call you PBJ for peanut butter jar ;)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2021 10:22:00 AM

So romantic Kim! A visual feast for the spirit. Congratulations on you firdt place win! Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2021 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 5:47:00 AM

So well expressed. Congrats on a fine win. Hugs Rick.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2021 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, Richard!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2021 3:32:00 AM

Congrats on a beautiful write! Love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2021 5:14:00 AM

Thank you, Regina!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/18/2021 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations on the gold trophy! Well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 8:24:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/18/2021 5:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win - well-deserved with this beautiful haiku. Love ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Mala!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2021 10:50:00 AM

Big congrats on your trophy win, Kim. Way to go.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:53:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/17/2021 1:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I am mesmerized by this Haiku write. Enjoy your wonderful win with blessings..............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/17/2021 10:10:00 AM

very well done Kim, congrats !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Rose,

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/17/2021 12:23:00 AM

Wonderful Composition. I could not. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thanks!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/16/2021 11:33:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! I'm mesmerized with delight... God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, sweet lady!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/16/2021 11:05:00 PM

Beautifully composed, Kim, your impressive entry moved up into first place at the very last minute after I had shortened the list, nevertheless, yours was a worthy competitor from the start, my compliments for your trophy win my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:55:00 AM

Thank you so much! Aloha!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 7/15/2021 6:57:00 PM

"Penetration of deep blue sky" - creative phrasing!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 7:23:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2021 2:37:00 AM

Creative work. Reads like a couple in love looking at the sky. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:33:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!