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Proof In Living and Carnations

What's found at the crack of an egg
wonderin if I have somethin', anything
left to say..   
bright yolk or young generations hope..   
open your mind, try if you can
whether breakfast or prayer for man.

Y'know I go to visit the lonely in their lonesome lands..
sit a spell, hold their hands. 
Visit with Bukowski, well of course I would. 
A lit cigarette held in shears.. 
expertly placed beween the spring and the pivot point,
tryin' to learn the meaning of the word poet.  

We're all stuck like swirling smoke
between the spring and the dull edge, 
hoping for shear ecstasy in cut rapture
like passing of the last carnation (flower for Mariupol).

Searching for myself in spoken word
just may've found it.. 
In verse of Cohen's Hallelujah, brought to
life in an age of Buckley, an age of genius
and beauty.., tho'
perhaps a little short-lived.. 
proof there's so much more we can give.
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 2:03 PM
A creative write. Love your line, "Searching for myself in spoken word." Have a blessed day writing away...............
Horsman Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 1:04 AM
An unique poem, on today. Love this Richard.
Rose  Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 6:30 AM
I love that song, and yes we are here for just a short while, best make the best of it, and give what we can of our talents, and love, :) have a blessed day dear one
Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 11:25 AM
I enjoy Cohen's Hallelujah and there are a couple of Christian interpretations which are just beautiful. I think one is Easter and the other Christmas. So sad what we are seeing on news on TV and reading on the internet about what is happening in Ukraine.
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 3:44 PM
thanks for the sweet Fave, Richard.
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 10:17 AM
happy Easter to you, my friend
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 10:16 AM
I like what Michelle says to you down here. My feelings also.
Sands Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 2:23 PM
A deep poem with a powerful lasting ending. ....proof there's so much more we can give. Well written Richard. :)
Faulkner Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 8:56 AM
This is the quest of the poet, to find what is left to say, to visit the lonely in lonesome lands, there are so many profound verses here (and I too am a big fan of Cohen's Hallelujah)
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 4:34 AM
Much depth you convey in this exploration, Richard---searching for myself in spoken word...
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