Promises Kept

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Dedicated to my wife Lilian

I’ll never forget the day I first kissed you,
Oh, how you blushed that first tender day,
How I whispered softly all I felt for you
And promised heaven would start on earth.

Look back my sweetheart and tell me true
If indeed my promises I have faithfully kept,
Don’t linger too long to answer, my cherished one,
I know I could never have disappointed you yet.

Did we not enjoy our honeymoon so full of enchantment?
Where music mesmerized us with melodious Mexican strains?
Served with food of finest, inimitable delicacies, satiated
Our appetite till we danced until the early hours of the day?

Then life’s humdrum came upon us, but we always laughed.
We went for walks and like newlyweds, we kissed and smiled.
Until as years rolled on, I got promoted and we could afford
A bigger house to fill with our dear little charming daughter.

And come what may, for I know life is short,
I will always maintain my vows and promises
I uttered with great sincerity on that lovely day
When we held hands and exchanged rings
And uttered that for us it was for better or for worse.
Still, if we had our lovely lives anew to start 
You’ll always be right here in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/2/2023 8:34:00 AM
Sweet, sweet write Victor. So romantic and heartfelt! :)
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Date: 12/22/2022 11:28:00 PM
A sweet and lovely tribute to your beautiful wife, Victor:)
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Date: 12/22/2022 10:12:00 AM
This is just wonderful, Victor. Thanks for directing me to it. My marriage was nothing like yours. My hubbie is so CRAZY sometimes. Surprisingly I have stayed married 47 years. Did you make it to your 50th? I hope so, your marriage was golden, Victor.
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Date: 12/21/2022 8:29:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to your sweetheart Lilian. I can vouch she enjoyed your love to the fullest ! The spontaneous smile on her face is mirroring the inner contentment she had. I am sure you both made an adorable couple.
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Date: 12/21/2022 4:26:00 AM
A bid wow! Salutations to true, undying love eternal
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Date: 12/20/2022 9:53:00 PM
Wow!!! Such a beautiful tribute to your wife... I know your wife reads this, smiles and blushes from heaven... What a wonderful relationship!!!
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:26:00 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, a beautiful tribute to your beautiful wife. You had a wonderful romance and married life, hopefully your memoirs are a comfort to you. Bless you, Belle
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Date: 12/20/2022 5:46:00 PM
A love that lasts…in your heart. God bless! A wonderful write and tribute to the love of your life! Hugs and Merry Christmas! ~ Kim
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Date: 12/20/2022 2:41:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem filled with everlasting love and deep felt emotions . So sweet is your love Victor which you have expressed so eloquently. Blessings to you this holiday season and all good wishes for the new Year . Love, Susan :)
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Date: 12/20/2022 12:28:00 PM
- Your beautiful wife Lilian smiles and nods from heaven ... she knows how much you loved her, Victor :) - What a wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 12/20/2022 9:07:00 AM
Such love for your love, Victor, truly enjoyed reading your memories. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:15:00 AM
What a beautiful tale of a long love affair, is told in this sweet, memory filled tribute to your wife. Wonderfully written, Victor. Blessings.
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:55:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece of your heart put in print Víctor, it's pure ,true and just wonderful
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:31:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to Lillian,I know you miss her all the time Victor and more so this time of year. You have many happy memories and she's in your heart forever. Tom
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:29:00 AM
A heartfelt tribute, Victor--wonderfully reminiscing in sweet memories. The ending line says it all.
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:00:00 AM
Oh Victor Victor…..what a beautiful moving poem for Lilian! It really touched my heart Victor. Lilian looks so lovely and sweet. You must miss her terribly. Your poem has made me emotional and sad. I am sure Lilian would be so happy and proud with those beautiful words you have dedicated to her. Shes probably reading them from heaven! Cuddles to you sweet Victor….Debx
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Date: 12/20/2022 5:55:00 AM
Oh Victor. Hello. I didn't know what I would be reading behind the title. I turned to find seeing reading and feeling within your most emotional and beautiful entry. The loss and pain never leaves or goes away. How are you doing physically health wise. I hope you are taking care of yourself. Thank you Victor for sharing your love and your life. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. Love and Blessings always. Thoughts and prayers for the new year.
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