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Promises

You look into my eyes and pretend to give me your whole world and I open my eyes to take it even though I know it isn't there how can I hold it against you when your false promises were the only thing that kept my blood pumping this year

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Date: 2/10/2024 5:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/24/2020 6:51:00 PM
Bec K T, Wonderful poem in 'promises' though some sadly unkept. -Richard
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Date: 11/30/2020 6:31:00 AM
Deeply emotive poem Bec...
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