Promises
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This was partially inspired by a key scene from the movie “The English Patient”
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he made promises
he could not keep
forces stacked against him
unable to overcome
returning home
with defeat in his heart
claiming both prize and failure
closing the loop on
passion and sorrow
life and death
Read on air by invitation ~ August 19, 2020 'POETIC INKLINGS'
AP: 3rd place 2020, Front Page Pick 2020
Posted on October 16, 2018
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018
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