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This was partially inspired by a key scene from the movie “The English Patient”

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he made promises he could not keep forces stacked against him unable to overcome returning home with defeat in his heart claiming both prize and failure closing the loop on passion and sorrow life and death Read on air by invitation ~ August 19, 2020 'POETIC INKLINGS' AP: 3rd place 2020, Front Page Pick 2020 Posted on October 16, 2018

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Date: 10/17/2018 1:43:00 PM
So sad, like the lines 'closing the loop on/passion and sorrow' - touching-
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.
Date: 10/16/2018 3:17:00 PM
Wow, that's a powerful poem; haven't seen the movie, but I must.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 3:26:00 PM
Absolutely, ML. It must have won best picture of the year when it came out.
Date: 10/16/2018 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful verse from a great movie, well done Line...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
If you recall the scene, it was so poignant and not a word was said. Thanks for your visit and comment, Charlie.

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