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Promise Rambunctious rainstorms Laugh - dance with rock and roll sun ~ Promise of rainbows.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 5:49:00 AM

Charming, Sam ~

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/20/2021 5:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Line! For me, spring is rainbow season - a mixture of tumultuous rainstorms mixed with sunlight making rainbows! Sending you a rainbow and a hug!

John Watt

Date: 4/26/2020 6:13:00 PM

Returning with rousing, rollicking remarks of respectful rejoicing. Rainbow revelry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2020 3:16:00 PM

Glad to see this one again as I peruse the winner list. BIG congrats, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2020 1:34:00 PM

Enjoy your win. I need to try the Haiku style. Have a wonderful week.........

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/26/2020 1:21:00 PM

Rock and roll sun with a promise.. Great write.. Congrats Sam..

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/28/2020 7:42:00 PM

Storms seem to dance for me! Thank you for your compliment and your congratulations - so appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2020 2:48:00 PM

how did I ever miss this rollicking write. Love that rock and roll sun!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2020 4:01:00 PM

Wanted this to be all out "rollicking" fun with the promise of the rainbow - the covenant - as the punchline. Thank you Andrea! Hope you are doing well.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/20/2020 6:24:00 PM

I like the idea of rainstorms rocking and rolling with the sun. How imaginative. Panagiota xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2020 4:08:00 PM

Hi there dear friend. One day it occurred to me that a rainbow needs both sunshine and rain dancing together! Dah! Seems like March is rainbow season here! Blessings of rainbows to you!

John Lawless

Date: 4/20/2020 6:05:00 PM

Rainbows....and puddles to splash in....hey rainbows bring out the kid in me. Nicely done Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2020 4:05:00 PM

You almost sound like a "northwest kid." When it rains I like to do rain paintings and take rain hikes to find puddles - the bigger the better! Let me know where the best puddles are John. Will join you in splashing through them! Thank you for your encouraging and supportive words! Be healthy!

John Watt

Date: 4/20/2020 12:12:00 PM

Sam, it's nice to see this haiku again, with all its rolling, rollicking, rainy, "r" words! Rainbows represent a promise, so a promise of rainbows is an especially lovely ending to this uplifting write. Blessings, my friend!

John Watt
Date: 4/22/2020 7:14:00 PM

"R" little in-joke...

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/20/2020 4:36:00 PM

This was such a fun haiku to w-Rite. Had a feeling the "promise" in the Rainbow wouldn't get past you! When I saw the haiku contest, thought it might make Really good entry. Thank you for your Return visit. Always appreciated! The blessings of Rainbows to you this day.