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Promise - Remember the Promise

Remember the Promise Garden gates slammed shut Tears of shame upon grieving cheeks Orphans looking back through barred gates Hear the promise – Messiah – Emmanuel. Remember the promise. Apocalyptic storm Contract to build a haven for life Sanctuary tossed upon fury driven waves Covenant in rainbows arching colors. Remember the promise! Dreams upon the desert Watch the morning pass to midnight Generations like stars beyond your sight Laughter swaddled in your arms. Remember the promise! A pledge of freedom From plagues and locusts sent Challenges footsteps to climb the sacred mountain I Am signature written in stone. Remember the Promise! Shepherd slinging stones Kings and giants give up their crowns To reign forever from generation to generation Man after the everlasting heart. Remember the promise! Promise never broken - Living breathing covenant Eternal promise in two nail scarred hands King and prophet - brother, friend. Remember the promise! 5/31/20 Contest: Promise

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:23:00 PM
This is such a deep verse Sam! A thought provoking one for all of us right now. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/6/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thank you so much SO for your placement - so appreciated - your contest, this wonderful theme and taking the time to sponsor a contest. Hope you are having a great day!
Date: 6/3/2020 9:07:00 AM
Great entry my friend...keep the promise...peace & love, brother...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/2/2020 6:14:00 PM
wow, a very powerful poem on His promise to us.(My mind goes right to the rainbow) Just wonderful.
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Date: 6/1/2020 10:28:00 PM
We should always remember Sam. Well written my friend.
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Date: 6/1/2020 6:52:00 PM
Oh, I LOVE this, Sam, a veritable tour of the Old Testament from Adam and Eve through the heroes of the faith (Noah, Abraham, Isaac, Moses, David, Joshua) all pointing to Messiah, with your wonderful refrain of Remember The Promise! Loved the fulfillment in the end... a new FAV for me! Really wonderful writing, my friend ~ John
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Date: 6/1/2020 6:26:00 PM
Well done Sam, a nice summary of the scriptures leading to Christ the Messiah, sadly most don't believe!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/2/2020 6:53:00 PM
It is sad. So many looking for answers and comfort in "all the wrong places." God's plan for salvation was just plain amazing as we look back with our 20/20 sight. It blows me away. Thank you for your message of faith, your friendship and your beautiful comment! Blessings!
Date: 6/1/2020 5:50:00 PM
Well done brother...You have not forgotten the promise...You are living it
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/2/2020 6:49:00 PM
Arturo, thank you for your lovely compliment. Sometimes it is hard to remember the promise, but it is the foundation and guiding light for me remembering God's unbroken covenants! Be blessed my friend!

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