Prisoner of Conscious Truth

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unrhymed couplets

To get behind the cobwebs this harsh cold wind awakens a soul Under a veil watching the spider darn it's web cutting to a heart whispering chills deeply bound Trapped as the sparkle of morning dew in shimmering light diamond cut clear through bouts of sunshine mist mirror reflections Whistling through the branches voices unknown partially whisper swaying nature speaks from the clouds gathering storm As the thunder roars heavy rain falls an image appears engraved on stone shining Partially illuminated by the sun a body of words supporting justice disappears

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/11/2019 8:21:00 AM

There is much depth in your verses Liam--I really liked the way you took the reader through splendid imagery.. to your potent ending line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 1:51:00 PM

- Excellent written, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/8/2019 7:31:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Very powerful, deep poem of your Faith, you've written,my dearest friend Liam.Wow!Very beautifully penned! Well expressed!Awesome!:)Lets pray for all,especially more for all the blind n' lost souls in this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are fine in everything, Liam.Remember the Lords always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^