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Prisoner

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~ my breath and bleak heart ... seized, with one slow, coquette kiss now ... locked in your keep ~

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Brian Davey

Date: 1/15/2019 8:33:00 AM

Love the last line of this write my friend

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 9:30:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Brian - thanks so much! :-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/14/2019 8:17:00 PM

Hello Gregory R. Barden, Very romantic. have a nice evening my friend.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 9:30:00 PM

You are always very kind, Darlene - thank you so much! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2019 8:46:00 PM

another excellent one!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! :-)

James Inman

Date: 1/12/2019 11:58:00 PM

Lovely

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sir! :-)

David Drowley

Date: 1/12/2019 5:54:00 PM

Greg, Excellent write. Shows concisely how passion can envelope us! Keep up the fine poetry. David :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so very much, David, I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2019 1:57:00 PM

Nicely penned poem of passion, Greg. If she steals your heart, we'll probably see less of you here, but still was be happy for you. Best wishes, Carolyn (Hope you'll try the Couples Clerihew before it fills. Some nice prizes.)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 2:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn - I finally wrote a Clerihew ... I wasn't sure where to go with it, but an idea finally struck! ;-) <3