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Prismatic Clouds

this sun is illusive like mind in thoughts of you and love i stand naked beneath unborn memories shadowless alone clouds above aglow in prismatic tears waiting to give birth to this emptiness that swells in my eyes

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John Hamilton

Date: 11/21/2019 3:41:00 PM

What a beautiful poem Sandy, prismatic clouds are beautiful aren't they, you turned this into a beautiful sadness, typically you! Just lovely, but then again I'm a sucker for melancholy!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:52:00 PM

They are gorgeous John, and i don't recall ever seeing so many at once, i tried to catch them on my phone camera but couldn't, bummer.... i wanted to write of their beauty but my muse turned it sad...yep that's me more often than not... thank you :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/20/2019 7:31:00 PM

Particularly love your title, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 7:44:00 PM

thank you... they are beautiful to see, i have seen them 3 times since fall began... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2019 1:50:00 PM

- A heartbreaking poem, Sandra ... the unborn child in prismatic clouds ... beautiful written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 2:20:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/20/2019 1:18:00 PM

Sigh, your poetry always touches my heart. Your words flow so softly and speak in comforting whispers no matter the theme you choose. You always amaze me Sandy. I stand in awe of your talent.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend your comment is so touching. I love looking up and seeing little cloud rainbows I call them solar bursts I don’t know what their proper name is. Thanks for being so kind Chris :) hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/20/2019 12:44:00 PM

Hello Sandra Adams,yes the clouds do cry tears downward to the ground. Have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Darlene they didn’t fall just made little rainbow clouds. Have a great day :) hugs