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Priory Woods March 2012

Not a wood yet, just sapling trees with the circle of friends around, mostly plots still unfilled but here and there a freshly turned mound. And it’s here she rests where she asked to be under wide open skies and the shade of a tree. And it is such a peaceful place, a pleasant walk when I visit every week and just sit and talk. There is a small herd of deer that I’ve never ever seen but by their hoof mark tracks I can see where they’ve been. They graze on the roses cropping them low but the roses fight back and in time will grow. In this pleasant place I sit and think of my wife, all the good times together in our long married life. I know in my heart her going was for her a kind of release: in this not yet wood with the deer and sapling trees I leave her at peace

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Date: 11/30/2022 4:58:00 AM
Both poems heartfelt and respectful. You tell a story without abundant descriptive words. You just tell it like it is and that is so appreciated. I agree with J. Summers regarding the level of your poetry. You are a standout and these two poems along with all your others, are testament to that.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/1/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thanks Wen. I really done know what to say ti your kind words. Writing for me is a selfish thing in that it helps me express my thoughts and emotions and cope with like. Your support has been wonderfully encouraging so thanks again.] Terry
Date: 11/29/2022 8:58:00 PM
The imagery and underlying tone of your words creates a poem both poignant and so emotional. I’ve got to Fav this as I don’t often see poetry of this level here, thanks much for sharing. John
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/1/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much John

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