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Flattered... my name meaning a Princess of ancient times, In the state of Malawa, where temple-bells rang chimes, Bard, Kalidasa, composed in Sanskrit an epic great About a Princess and her story of disguise and fate. Agnimitra, handsome Prince, enamoured by her beauty, But he was not aware of her true identity! Thrilled to imagine myself heroine of such a story, romance, and intrigue - part of a history and glory! To some, my name symbolises a purple flower, Which never fails to charm viewers’ hearts, in its bower. To some others, it represents a graceful supple plant, My mother thought I was a blessing which her God did grant! My father exclaimed - she is the “garland” for me, My daughter, my ultimate joy, a sublime beauty! Many years they waited eagerly to embrace a girl, My parents thought - they were gifted a gem purer than pearl.

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Date: 8/13/2023 10:47:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Mala :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/13/2023 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. My mother really chose my full name from the classic. My father chose the first part - Mala - which means “Garland”.
Date: 8/13/2023 9:20:00 AM
My friend, this is superbly written creation. You and your family are truly blessed and your poetry is very, very good. God bless.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/13/2023 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Robert, with all my heart. Your “Fave” means a lot - so appreciate! Blessings ~ Mala
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/13/2023 9:21:00 AM
And this is a fav for me.
Date: 8/10/2023 9:44:00 PM
Your couplet is as beautiful as your name. Magnificent! I truly love the whole story. :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2023 8:26:00 AM
Dear Akkina, so delighted to read your comment. Thank you. I am curious to know what your name means.
Date: 8/10/2023 3:15:00 PM
Hello Mala, it is nice that your name has two meanings. My friend. Friendship & Love/Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2023 10:42:00 AM
My name is an old English name. Darlene also daring, affectionate. Friendship and Love, Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2023 8:25:00 AM
Dear Darlene, Thank you. What is the meaning of your name? Did you find out?
Date: 8/10/2023 1:38:00 PM
A beautiful write/story. I love it. Have a great day writing away.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/10/2023 1:56:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Your visit is always a joy!
Date: 8/10/2023 11:15:00 AM
Very nice. True story? My wife's Korean name, Mi-ok means beautiful land
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/10/2023 11:52:00 AM
Nice
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/10/2023 11:43:00 AM
Yes, it’s a true story from where my name was derived. In India, parents care very much about their children’s names. It may come from nature, or some mythology, or some characteristics they want their children to possess. Your wife’s name is beautiful!

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