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All About My Name

Flattered... my name meaning a Princess of ancient times, 
In the state of Malawa, where temple-bells rang chimes,
Bard, Kalidasa, composed in Sanskrit an epic great
About a Princess and her story of disguise and fate. 

Agnimitra, handsome Prince, enamoured by her beauty, 
But he was not aware of her true identity!
Thrilled to imagine myself heroine of such a story,
romance, and intrigue - part of a history and glory! 

To some, my name symbolises a purple flower, 
Which never fails to charm viewers’ hearts, in its bower. 
To some others, it represents a graceful supple plant,
My mother thought I was a blessing which her God did grant! 

My father exclaimed - she is the “garland” for me, 
My daughter, my ultimate joy, a sublime beauty! 
Many years they waited eagerly to embrace a girl, 
My parents thought - they were gifted a gem purer than pearl.
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Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 10:47 AM
- Beautiful poem, Mala :) - hugs
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. My mother really chose my full name from the classic. My father chose the first part - Mala - which means “Garland”.
Lindley Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 9:20 AM
My friend, this is superbly written creation. You and your family are truly blessed and your poetry is very, very good. God bless.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Thank you, Robert, with all my heart. Your “Fave” means a lot - so appreciate! Blessings ~ Mala
Lindley Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 9:21 AM
And this is a fav for me.
Downing  Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Your couplet is as beautiful as your name. Magnificent! I truly love the whole story. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Dear Akkina, so delighted to read your comment. Thank you. I am curious to know what your name means.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 3:15 PM
Hello Mala, it is nice that your name has two meanings. My friend. Friendship & Love/Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 10:42 AM
My name is an old English name. Darlene also daring, affectionate. Friendship and Love, Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Dear Darlene, Thank you. What is the meaning of your name? Did you find out?
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 1:38 PM
A beautiful write/story. I love it. Have a great day writing away.............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Thanks, Paula. Your visit is always a joy!
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