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Priming September's Fall

~September of remembrance to savor, after grueling August drought, ~Ever so pleasing, such as enjoying just one rain spout. ~Priming is timing an equinox change, adjusting period format, ~Timing is crucial as squirrels scamper about storing their winter’s fat. ~Enormous are the compose piles in back yards and the wilds, ~Major rich habitat, create images of squirming earth worm smiles. ~But yes, four seasons for good reason change human attitude, ~Enough recycles, and change rearrange human habitude. ~Remembering the equinox of fall, expressing to Creator some gratitude. In Honor of Carol Brown And Contest: Fall is Just Around The Corner

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Date: 9/13/2011 10:46:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : ) And thanks - loved your contest
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Date: 9/10/2011 12:32:00 AM
Congrats, awsome job:)
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Date: 9/9/2011 3:51:00 PM
Just great John your verse has been improving with leaps and bounds..throughly enjoyable, congrad's light & love
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations John on your win with this poem in praise of fall. Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:52:00 AM
fall is honored with your write!! congrats in the contest win!!
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:39:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest John with this great entry
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:21:00 PM
A nice take on September. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,john
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:08:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, a thoughtful and spiritual write...
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:39:00 PM
Many congrats to you, John : )
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:30:00 PM
Congrats on the win, John! Like your unique, thoughtful take on the contest. Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:04:00 PM
you are tops, moe… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:55:00 PM
hey john congrats on a great win, love it..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:54:00 PM
September's scenery is portrayed beautifully in your poem, John. Very nice work! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congrats Moses on first place win with this cool write for Fall luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 1:36:00 PM
wow! i'm sure this will be on the winner's list. great descriptions, especially the squirrels, and awesome ending :)
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:42:00 AM
John: Your awareness and understanding gained through experience or study is appreciated. Your creations have never been boring my friend. You have a talent. Love reading your works. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:04:00 PM
great work my friend....are you getting rain or clouds yets??
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:05:00 PM
You described a lot about September in this one. Glad to see so many nice poems on a great month like this!
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:05:00 PM
great title too! glad I saw this before it scrolled off the list of poems for today!
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Moses.
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