Primal

It's the sun's prerogative
whether to shine.
It's the moon's volition, 
to make our dreams sublime.
It's the stars discretion,
whether we align.

But to love you
is a choice all mine.

Primal and divine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Nice rhyming...! I love the metaphors invoked here.
Agustin Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
Polese Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I also go by deliabear on Deep Underground Poetry.
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 2:15 PM
An enjoyable verse Debbie a big welcome to poetry soup. Tom
Polese Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Why thank you so very much!
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Quite a compelling serenade!
Polese Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Thank you for the nice compliment. I hope to post more.
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