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Primal

It's the sun's prerogative whether to shine. It's the moon's volition, to make our dreams sublime. It's the stars discretion, whether we align. But to love you is a choice all mine. Primal and divine!

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Date: 2/24/2023 10:13:00 AM
Nice rhyming...! I love the metaphors invoked here.
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:39:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Debbie Polese
Date: 2/23/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I also go by deliabear on Deep Underground Poetry.
Date: 2/22/2023 2:15:00 PM
An enjoyable verse Debbie a big welcome to poetry soup. Tom
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Debbie Polese
Date: 2/23/2023 7:51:00 AM
Why thank you so very much!
Date: 2/21/2023 4:28:00 AM
Quite a compelling serenade!
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Debbie Polese
Date: 2/23/2023 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for the nice compliment. I hope to post more.

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