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Prie-Dieu

April's roses scent inebriates every sense below the Gothic cathedral cardinals doze draping their wings over evergreen plants foreshadowing a cool sunset griffins guard the bell-tower hampering the intruders inflicting fear on the jackals jaundiced they hide into a jalopy kapok is soft as cotton ladybugs allow no sleep manifesting vulgar wit nibbling on naugat oblitaring any sweetness prie-dieu is her comfort quickning my understanding ravishing the merry opus shedding light on her faith tending toward forgiveness unquestionable in its promise verboten to dishonor it wimple as sworn devotion xenophobe not permitted yodeling is immense praise zither plays a Gregorian chant Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 5/26/2010 5:00:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your 3rd place in the ABC contest with your amazing poem.. thankxxx for your special loving words today .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:21:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 2/3/2010 12:49:00 PM
I'm befuddled...there were 25 verses entered (maybe a few more?) and Soup closed it for me stopped allowing enteries. I definetly read your verse if memories serves you were in the range from 5-10 because it didn't really do the form correctly BUT was excellent. NOW, I do not see it on the contest site in my comp. and I only have 24 entries>?? All I can think is if you triend to make a correction ..Soup may not have let you back in?? Sorry hon waiting for email address to send you book proof.
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Date: 2/2/2010 12:56:00 PM
Wonderful poem Andrew, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:16:00 PM
prie-dieu is her confort/comfort?? I am having Andrea's quandry below. I have to reread the form defination. This is still a marvelous effort! Thank you! Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2010 10:07:00 AM
'very Gregorian sounding (If I remember the meaning of that word correctly!) I am still not certain if just one word, a phrase or a long sentence should be used in these ABC poems. I am seeing examples of all, so I imagine they are like acrostics, in that you can do any line lengths? Thanks for your welcome comment to me. I do so admire your work! LUv, Andrea ps and I bet you'll do well if this one is for the contest!
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Date: 1/31/2010 12:58:00 AM
Trés bien!
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:30:00 PM
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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