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proud pride of lions prowl the grasslands for their prey buffalo stands strong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/28/2012 10:01:00 PM
Hola, Joseph ;-) I feel like a butterfly, watching it all..... I don't know who I'd fear more... a hungry Lion,,or a buffalo standing strong.. I'm gonna fly off, and smell the pretty flowers now..LOL... they have no room for my wings, down the lion's hungry, den... and pride doesn't mean he won't be drop... love the image.. felt as if i was watching the "Discovery channel." thank you for the awesome haiku... always..PD
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Date: 5/26/2012 12:35:00 AM
I like how you combined lions and buffalo. Both such strong and proud beasts!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2012 5:56:00 AM
thank you Andrea..
Date: 5/25/2012 8:11:00 AM
Excellent alliteration and imagery. Have a good day.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2012 5:56:00 AM
thank you Peggy
Date: 5/25/2012 4:35:00 AM
Yes indeed..an excellent imagery, love lions.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/25/2012 6:14:00 AM
Thank you G ,,I appreciate your comments