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Pricked Everywhere

A fat man while clambering up a tree
To pluck pears was stung by a swarm of bee
Alas! With a heavy thud, 
He landed in the dry mud
Bees stung on his limp prick and he couldn’t flee!

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2023

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/5/2023 7:37:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/5/2023 6:21:00 AM LOL Valsa. :)) Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 9/3/2023 3:21:00 PM Valsa, hilarious, made me laugh, congratulations on your first place win! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 9/3/2023 11:48:00 PM Thanks a lot Tania for the high placement you have hgiven me.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/30/2023 9:12:00 AM this is a very enjoyable read, Valsa. Login to Reply

Stephan McBride Date: 8/27/2023 1:24:00 PM Hilarious: ) beautiful craftsmanship in putting this together: ) Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 8/27/2023 2:13:00 AM Oh gosh, this is hilarious and so creatively done, I'm absolutely loving your witty imagery and immaculately articulated clever wordsmithery. Such a humorous and wonderful limerick dear, sending love- Hiya :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/26/2023 8:47:00 PM Oh my! That fat p****…oh my did I say that out loud. Laughing out loud. You went for it, Valsa…all the way…no holding back! Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 8/25/2023 6:24:00 PM well penned, is it divine justice ? ( smile) have a nice week end poet Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/25/2023 12:14:00 PM Whoa!! Sad state of affairs for that man. I hope he heals soon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 8/25/2023 9:47:00 AM Hard to believe this limerick from saintly Valsa. Well the contest is for such new ideas. Well penned. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/25/2023 6:23:00 AM Talk about OUCH! Good one, Valsa. Janice Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/25/2023 5:22:00 AM Nicely humorous limerick, Valsa, Enjoyed and thanks for the grin. Good luck with the contest Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 8/25/2023 4:39:00 AM A bawdy chuckle for sure Valsa! Though I am laughing, I'm feeling the "sting" at the same time! Good Luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/25/2023 2:44:00 AM Heheheh I had to check to see it was really you that wrote that Valsa !!! Yup it was really you ! Can I say that I am laughing that you wrote it? I hope it wins sweet Valsa Login to Reply

Aysha Nuwas Date: 8/25/2023 12:38:00 AM haha thanks for making me smile today, :) Login to Reply