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August.25.2023

A Fruity and Funny Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsor. Tania Kitchin

PLACED FIRST

A fat man while clambering up a tree To pluck pears was stung by a swarm of bee Alas! With a heavy thud, He landed in the dry mud Bees stung on his limp prick and he couldn’t flee!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:21:00 AM

LOL Valsa. :)) Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 3:21:00 PM

Valsa, hilarious, made me laugh, congratulations on your first place win!

Valsa George
Date: 9/3/2023 11:48:00 PM

Thanks a lot Tania for the high placement you have hgiven me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2023 9:12:00 AM

this is a very enjoyable read, Valsa.

Stephan McBride

Date: 8/27/2023 1:24:00 PM

Hilarious: ) beautiful craftsmanship in putting this together: )

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/27/2023 2:13:00 AM

Oh gosh, this is hilarious and so creatively done, I'm absolutely loving your witty imagery and immaculately articulated clever wordsmithery. Such a humorous and wonderful limerick dear, sending love- Hiya :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/26/2023 8:47:00 PM

Oh my! That fat p****…oh my did I say that out loud. Laughing out loud. You went for it, Valsa…all the way…no holding back!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/25/2023 6:24:00 PM

well penned, is it divine justice ? ( smile) have a nice week end poet

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2023 12:14:00 PM

Whoa!! Sad state of affairs for that man. I hope he heals soon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 8/25/2023 9:47:00 AM

Hard to believe this limerick from saintly Valsa. Well the contest is for such new ideas. Well penned.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/25/2023 6:23:00 AM

Talk about OUCH! Good one, Valsa. Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/25/2023 5:22:00 AM

Nicely humorous limerick, Valsa, Enjoyed and thanks for the grin. Good luck with the contest

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/25/2023 4:39:00 AM

A bawdy chuckle for sure Valsa! Though I am laughing, I'm feeling the "sting" at the same time! Good Luck in the contest!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/25/2023 2:44:00 AM

Heheheh I had to check to see it was really you that wrote that Valsa !!! Yup it was really you ! Can I say that I am laughing that you wrote it? I hope it wins sweet Valsa

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 8/25/2023 12:38:00 AM

haha thanks for making me smile today, :)