Valsa George Poet Limerick

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August.25.2023

A Fruity and Funny Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsor. Tania Kitchin

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Pricked Everywhere

A fat man while clambering up a tree
To pluck pears was stung by a swarm of bee
Alas! With a heavy thud, 
He landed in the dry mud
Bees stung on his limp prick and he couldn’t flee!

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Paula Goldsmith September 5, 2023 at 7:37 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Linda Alice Fowler September 5, 2023 at 6:21 AM LOL Valsa. :)) Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin September 3, 2023 at 3:21 PM Valsa, hilarious, made me laugh, congratulations on your first place win! Valsa George September 3, 2023 at 11:48 PM Thanks a lot Tania for the high placement you have hgiven me.

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2023 at 9:12 AM this is a very enjoyable read, Valsa.

Stephan McBride August 27, 2023 at 1:24 PM Hilarious: ) beautiful craftsmanship in putting this together: )

Hiya Sharma August 27, 2023 at 2:13 AM Oh gosh, this is hilarious and so creatively done, I'm absolutely loving your witty imagery and immaculately articulated clever wordsmithery. Such a humorous and wonderful limerick dear, sending love- Hiya :)

Kim Rodrigues August 26, 2023 at 8:47 PM Oh my! That fat p****…oh my did I say that out loud. Laughing out loud. You went for it, Valsa…all the way…no holding back!

Yann Rolland August 25, 2023 at 6:24 PM well penned, is it divine justice ? ( smile) have a nice week end poet

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2023 at 12:14 PM Whoa!! Sad state of affairs for that man. I hope he heals soon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Jay Narain August 25, 2023 at 9:47 AM Hard to believe this limerick from saintly Valsa. Well the contest is for such new ideas. Well penned.

Janice Canerdy August 25, 2023 at 6:23 AM Talk about OUCH! Good one, Valsa. Janice

Sotto Poet August 25, 2023 at 5:22 AM Nicely humorous limerick, Valsa, Enjoyed and thanks for the grin. Good luck with the contest

Mike Gentile August 25, 2023 at 4:39 AM A bawdy chuckle for sure Valsa! Though I am laughing, I'm feeling the "sting" at the same time! Good Luck in the contest!

Speaks Volumes August 25, 2023 at 2:44 AM Heheheh I had to check to see it was really you that wrote that Valsa !!! Yup it was really you ! Can I say that I am laughing that you wrote it? I hope it wins sweet Valsa

Aysha Nuwas August 25, 2023 at 12:38 AM haha thanks for making me smile today, :)