- Priceless Jewel Illuminates -

Dazzling starlight smile 
a reason for existence replays 
Exploding breathless within the mind
I am just following the heart 
Holding inside a vision 
One rose warm flickering candle 
Time alone dreams walking along beaches 
looking across oceans 

Silent kiss dew of the night lost at sea
Listening to waves crash as the seagulls cry
to feel the wind  through our hair
capturing currents deeply move 
Wishing to share a good movie scene
especially if the story line's gripping

Enriched with beauty and gentle tranquility
when two souls completely unite hotly
Like a never ending fire through the night
Sparks will ignite a fireworks of loving grace 

A life with love filled hope
Holding hands burning inside chambers warm joy 
To melt freely into arms holding deep beauty shines 
Hold me tightly in your loving strong embrace
never let us part ways ever 

Each passing moon you become a superstar gleam 
A world becomes nothing 
if our dreams whisper away slowly 
As this ocean inside deeply crawls 
looking up with the head inside clouds
 
Destiny howls awaiting fates taste  
sealed with the forever lingering kiss 
Mystically enchanting a princess enters 
through chambers gate a warm welcoming guest 
As passion pervades into the moonlit night
darkness tastes from the light 

Sparkling one golden sunbeam 
a key turns with you 
Growing stronger every waking day 
The future is so brightly lit
an adventure opens scroll 
Unwinding steps forward precious
There will be more moments like this
from the treasure chest of life 
Priceless jewel illuminates 






Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 26.10.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 4:13 AM
Such synchronized pens, Anne. Another jewel has been crafted beautifully. 7. Have a great week! huggs
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 3:25 AM
- Kim, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leake Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 2:41 PM
A very magical story here Anne, Beautifully written with lot's of passion, reminded me of some distant fairy tale!!! Good collaboration Best wishes Kevin
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 3:24 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Creative collaboration..I enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my p age..I still long for the seven layer fudge cake but know that I would eat too much if I made one..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 4:56 AM
- You can enjoy the smell ..... and send them to me :))) - Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Romantic passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:16 AM
- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! Another powerful, passionate, and mystical write which is nothing less than Outstanding. Each of the seven stanzas build on and blend in with each other to form a sparkling mosaic of hope and love as one journeys toward the "chest of life" in which the "priceless jewel illuminates." A "7" + "FAV" for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:15 AM
- Glad you liked this write, dear friend Gary - Thanks for the nice visit a 7+ Fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Each verse a spark of beauty that ignites the soul which erupts in a phantasmagoric display of bliss! A seven for each of you, dear friends, Anne-Lise and Liam!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:14 AM
- Dear Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Descriptive and flowing freely sweet Anne Lise and Liam... =`) hugs! ~Olive Eloisa
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:13 AM
- Olive, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 5:10 AM
Floats like a silk scarf in the breeze, Anne-Lise, a lovely write. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:10 AM
- Viv, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kapoor Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:48 AM
The Poem has captured beautifully the mood of the Nature with rising thoughts and feelings of the engaged lovers. Brilliant collaboration of yours with Liam Mc Daid. A full 7 Anne for this sweet romantic poem and thank you once again for your words on my today's Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:09 AM
- Glad you liked this write, Ravindra - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Artis Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:48 PM
This is has to be one of the greatest collabs ever! I love the vivid imagery and the romanticism. So passionate and directly from the heart. I enjoyed reading it from top to bottom! +7
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 3:36 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Elis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Simply beautiful guys...a key turns with you...love that line
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:12 AM
- Thanks Tim for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Great write, Anne Lise! Loved your imagery.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:12 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Hi Anne Lise n' Liam! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:15 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful bouquet of lovely words and a 7, dear Dorian :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:44 AM
also thank you dear friends for the truly heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you both a blessed week filled with happiness
Mcdaid Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:42 AM
your words anne lise danced this to a whole new level always a pleasure sharing pens with you deeply appreciated dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful week filled with warm smiles
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:13 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful poem, dear friend Liam :) -Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:34 AM
You and Liam are really in sinc. Another exceptional write!
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:12 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful words and lovely visit, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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