Prevailing winds

There are days we live only for others
and happy to share in ours, 
words of devotion
even scars. 

Though I never presumed to know 
or even understand..
only pretend.

But this time's not the same
this unshakable thing,
like a pain,
is not pretending.

A feeling that wakes you from a deep sleep
real, whatever that is.. 
transcending all moments that came before
you. 

Although still hear
so clear, another voice,
one that claims to be sane 
'I didn't want this'. 
Damn all this weakness. 

The other says 'show me..,  
do not tell me in a whisper'.
Like a drumbeat in the desert wind..   
love is hard of hearing.
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Date: 6/16/2025 10:23:00 PM
Hello Quoth, this is a very heartfelt write, beautifully done. Loved the last line. Love is also blind. Have a lovely day.
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:33:00 AM
Excellent poem ! I like the line, like a drumbeat in the desert wind :)
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Date: 5/28/2025 9:26:00 PM
Fears seem to have lives of their own. Your poem is a wake up call. Humility is the victor.
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Date: 5/26/2025 5:15:00 PM
I really tripped fantastic to this, enjoyed the daylights out of it. I think an 'i' ran away from its place between although and still. Bad, bad i. (can't help but help, I was an Executive Assistant for heap long time. Enjoyed your poem, had fun, too ... CayCay and
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:45:00 PM
Amazing write, Richard. Profundity in motion. ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/22/2025 11:23:00 PM
soulful write wc makes me reflect in a good way ..and thanks for your potd cheers on my page!
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/29/2025 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Nette, and you're very welcome. Your elegant pen is on pointe. -Richard
Date: 5/21/2025 2:38:00 PM
Deep writing, Quoth. Love the final question it poses
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:23:00 PM
Paige, Thanks, liked your poem "Stolen Nights". I wonder sometimes what thoughts provoke a write. -Richard
Date: 5/21/2025 9:49:00 AM
Good one. The last stanza, especially the last line really makes this one.
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/29/2025 7:16:00 PM
Thanks for that Oliver, the desert is a recurring theme of late. -Richard
Date: 5/21/2025 5:53:00 AM
Good to see a new poem Richard. This one is deeper than it first appears but your last line sums it up well
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:14:00 PM
Tom, Thanks for this comment. -Richard
Date: 5/20/2025 6:10:00 AM
This is so deep and poignant. What a superb ending for it.
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/29/2025 7:13:00 PM
Andrea, Thank you. -Richard
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