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Pretty Perfect

She is pretty perfect, the mommy warned the teacher. Please try and keep her this way. The teacher smiled, used to these mommies of perfect children. The child looked down, embarrassed. The rest of us looked up in amazement. She could play the piano. She could sing, and it was pretty. She was an artist. She was pretty perfect in every way. The parent was right. We loved her and carried her around like a china doll. Loving her perfectness, Admiring her, Striving to be our own perfect selves. None of us lived up. We kept this quiet, Hoping she would still love us, And she did. Her name was Becky. When she grew up she turned her name into Bruce And became a boy, and her mother tried to tell us she was not perfect, But we knew that she was.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/6/2018 11:06:00 AM
well penned; it seems that anyone different in our society, gets a bad rap. Are we ever going to learn to live and let live?"
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2018 11:16:00 AM
I certainly hope so, I know that we are both doing our part to enlighten.
Date: 11/3/2018 3:46:00 PM
As with all your poems, this definitely breaks stereotype and expectations! Beautiful depiction of people seeing and appreciating another person... no matter what the "lifestyle"!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/3/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Rhona. If I am here to do anything I hope it is to break the stereotyping of PEOPLE.

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