Pretty Blue Dress

i remember you laying there
in that pretty blue dress
you said you loved
because it matched
my eyes

i remember your hands
folded against your chest
my little hands clasped them
as i gently shook 
your lifeless body
as you laid there
motionless

i remember 
that sleeping beauty moment
where i tried to kiss you awake
only death kissed back
as my tears trailed
your pretty blue dress

i remember
putting my picture
beneath your pillow
so you would never forget
how i looked before i aged

i still see you
standing in that dress
trying to steady yourself
on those unpliable
wooden legs

i still see you
grimace in pain
every morning
as you tried 
to hide your tears
beneath cupped hands
as i reached for you

i still see you
as the years pass by
i now feel your pain
as i try to steady myself
in these steps i take
as i inch closer
to your age
and you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 27, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Wow, 1st place all alone...not that is an amazing accomplishment but not unexpected for this beautiful and heart touching poem Sandy. Congratulations my friend.
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January 27, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Thank you so much Chris the win and your comment made me smile as this poem is vey special to me :) hugs
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January 27, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Sandra, you SO deserved your top win. This poem is almost indescribably beautiful and touching! Janice
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January 27, 2020 at 10:13 AM
wow, what a kind thing to say, thank you so much Janice :) hugs
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January 26, 2020 at 11:07 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Our moms are blessings from the Lord. (My Mom succumbed to complications of diabetes in 2004.) God bless you.
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January 27, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Thank you Beata ... sorry about your loss this disease has taken most of my family. I too am a type one diabetic .. thank you for your visit and comment... hugs
Dutta Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:38 AM
So touchy classy. Each will be moved. Congrats to win top.
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January 26, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thank you so much Anisha... she was my rock when i was a small child... hugs
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January 20, 2020 at 10:46 PM
Sandra, Powerful poem of loss and the way memories keeps experiences alive. Congratulations! Our oldest son is a type 2 diabetic. I understand.
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January 26, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thank you so much Sam... diabetes hits everyone on my mom's side of the family...my brother was a type on, as am i... my sister is diabetic as well but she wasn't tested for the type... it's a way of life for us... hugs and blessings!
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January 20, 2020 at 9:27 PM
This is simply beautiful. Your love shines through. Congrats on your win.
Adams Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much Agnes :) hugs
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November 10, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Couldn't stop thinking of that Willie Nelson classic, "Pretty Paper (Pretty Ribbons of Blue)," while reading this tear-jerker (meant as a compliment)… (Soupmail, please). Cheers, Gershon
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November 10, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Thank you so much....Diabetes took her at 62, she was still young, my rock....i now have that dreaded disease, i worry especially when the monitor wakes me up saying urgent low, though usually it is wrong, but i cannot assume it is wrong and not get up to check it...perhaps if they had these things back then she would have lived a longer life... hugs :)
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November 7, 2019 at 2:12 PM
I feel the pain of your memories my friend..that ending line tugs the heart.
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Vijay, she will always be alive in my memories...i was but a child when she passed.... hugs :)
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November 7, 2019 at 12:01 PM
I'm with Chris, it's hard to comment on this write. Definitely a year jerker.
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Thank you Alexis :)
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November 7, 2019 at 11:15 AM
I can't even comment on this because the tears filling my eyes make it hard to see to type.
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Don’t cry. She was always my rock and the reason I fight :) hugs
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