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The Homeless People and animals are helpless on the street of any city, regarded as worthless, society just passes them by, empty and hollow, they fall into a black abyss of nothingness. Today, I saw a man with a kitten, and I ran to the store for food, even though I had only a little money, I did not want to just walk by. Running back with a bag of food for the man and some kitten food, breathless inside I was weeping when the spot they had been in was empty. They were gone. Turning in circles, I searched for them, but they were lost in a deep chasm, in some doorway probably, crouched and starving. Oh I should have told him to stay, only then, I spotted them and walked fast in that direction, and now, I stroked the little one as she purred and ate, the man smiled his thanks. _______________________ April 8, 2016 Poetry/Acrostic/Preterition Copyright Protected, ID 16-7750814-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Preterition sponsor, Sara Kenrick Honorable Mention

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Date: 5/18/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for the entry in my Preterition contest.I enjoyed reading your work.These members of society are passed by,ignored,avoided,etc. If this is based on truth then I must commend you for the kind act.If you had begun your poem with a line like, the homeless are ignored and not talked about.. I really don't want to discuss them today..Then it that would have been more like Preterition..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks again for the entry..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:08:00 AM
This is such a touch poem, Broken Wings, it aches to see those that are in need and I with so much. I do try to help. A 7 and good luck in the contest. Eve
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:52:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting with that nice comment and they 7, appreciate !!
Date: 4/29/2016 2:23:00 AM
Beautifully done, most touching ... CayCay
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:14:00 AM
CayCay, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, that image broke my heart so I had to use it as my inspiration !
Date: 4/10/2016 9:52:00 PM
You see many homeless people where I live - Manhattan. This is a kind and considerate peace of work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:16:00 AM
Matthew, thanks for visiting my poem, yes I can imagine the homeless in Manhattan, it must be heartbreaking !!
Date: 4/8/2016 6:44:00 PM
the picture alone is so heart wrenching, Constance. You did a wonderful poem. I am still not sure how to do this form. but what you came up with sure puts mine to shame.
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:11:00 PM
Andrea, yes, that picture is so sad, thanks for the wonderful !
Date: 4/8/2016 11:25:00 AM
Such a touching poem BW good luck in the contest:-) Have you ever read a 'street cat called Bob - I think you would love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:19:00 PM
Jan thanks for the comment, I will have to look for Bob ...
Date: 4/8/2016 9:21:00 AM
Hello :) wonderful work right here...really pulls on the heartstrings because it's sadly true Nevertheless great poem a 7 most certainly! Looking forward to reading more of your work-Love Ettie
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:44:00 AM
Ettie, thanks for visiting my poem, it is such a sad thing, we have a lot of homeless in my city both human and dogs, cats, it is heartbreaking, thanks for the wonderful too ~
Date: 4/7/2016 11:14:00 PM
This is very touching Constance!!!! Left me speechless....7+
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:44:00 AM
Anand, thanks for visiting and for the 7 +, appreciate ~

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