Presumptions and Truths

With presumptions, not truth
Searching through our youth
We thought the crystal world would splinter
Into iridescent fragments
And spin us dizzily far into space
to face what might be emptiness

So naively formed, was innocence 
We vainly sought with logic's eyes, 
a dream to make us come alive
From thoughts we shaped from small cocoons 

We leaned against the wind 
and let it scoop us up too high
reshape our words, and let them fly 
We hoped to toss them where they could
and resolve the problems of the world
....

From all the thoughts we sought to claim
Were we so ignorant of what is real?
What determines how stars will swing
Or how an eagle's wing, remote and sure
Can bring strange longing to the mind
Where power beyond the known is ours
to seek and find and come of age

How long we stood, and now remember
How changeless is a planet's power
Glimmering in search of answers
And still not wringing the answers from the slightest sound

.........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 9:23 AM
I appreciate you entering my contest. Great poem.
A   Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
Strand Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Winter Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 8:38 AM
YAY Carrie!!! Warmest congrats on a most well deserved win! Big love and hugs! XOXOXO
Goff Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 7:16 AM
Carrie, words are not worthy to describe the breathtaking beauty of this awesome write! congratulations on your deserved victory in the contest! I almost feinted at the ethereal shimmer of your last line!!! your fan! jimbo
Smalling Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:30 PM
We all have a better nature in ourselves ... that is where great poems come from too ... this is such an awesome write ... thank you every time.
Ahmad Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Amazing!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Carrie, The hope for change found in these words is eternal. I hope it doesn't take all of eternity for man, one heart at a time, grow to peace. But for now, it seems so. Very nice write. Love, Dane
Strand Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 1:23 AM
Some beautiful imagery within this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Winter Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 5:57 AM
One of my favorite songs of all time. Absolutely doing it justice and more here. Deeply inspirational. Good luck Carrie! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 1:04 AM
Bes wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my recent posting
Bingham Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Wonderful write, with hopes of a place that we can only imagine. God Bless. Ron
Higgins Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 2:35 PM
If only we could imagine all the people living in harmony..can you imagine it?...a world where we get along when people are judge by the content of their character rather than all the other bullcrap that we throw out..a world where we are one with the earth like the original occupants of this great land...I love this song..it always put me in a frame of mind to make things happen....best wishes dear Carrie..hope your heart is smiling.
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