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Presumptions and Truths

With presumptions, not truth Searching through our youth We thought the crystal world would splinter Into iridescent fragments And spin us dizzily far into space to face what might be emptiness So naively formed, was innocence We vainly sought with logic's eyes, a dream to make us come alive From thoughts we shaped from small cocoons We leaned against the wind and let it scoop us up too high reshape our words, and let them fly We hoped to toss them where they could and resolve the problems of the world .... From all the thoughts we sought to claim Were we so ignorant of what is real? What determines how stars will swing Or how an eagle's wing, remote and sure Can bring strange longing to the mind Where power beyond the known is ours to seek and find and come of age How long we stood, and now remember How changeless is a planet's power Glimmering in search of answers And still not wringing the answers from the slightest sound .........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/26/2015 9:23:00 AM
I appreciate you entering my contest. Great poem.
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:08:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:59:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/19/2009 8:38:00 AM
YAY Carrie!!! Warmest congrats on a most well deserved win! Big love and hugs! XOXOXO
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Date: 7/19/2009 7:16:00 AM
Carrie, words are not worthy to describe the breathtaking beauty of this awesome write! congratulations on your deserved victory in the contest! I almost feinted at the ethereal shimmer of your last line!!! your fan! jimbo
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:30:00 PM
We all have a better nature in ourselves ... that is where great poems come from too ... this is such an awesome write ... thank you every time.
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Date: 5/29/2009 1:18:00 PM
Amazing!
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Date: 5/28/2009 5:09:00 AM
Carrie, The hope for change found in these words is eternal. I hope it doesn't take all of eternity for man, one heart at a time, grow to peace. But for now, it seems so. Very nice write. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/28/2009 1:23:00 AM
Some beautiful imagery within this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/27/2009 5:57:00 AM
One of my favorite songs of all time. Absolutely doing it justice and more here. Deeply inspirational. Good luck Carrie! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:04:00 AM
Bes wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my recent posting
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:37:00 PM
Wonderful write, with hopes of a place that we can only imagine. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:35:00 PM
If only we could imagine all the people living in harmony..can you imagine it?...a world where we get along when people are judge by the content of their character rather than all the other bullcrap that we throw out..a world where we are one with the earth like the original occupants of this great land...I love this song..it always put me in a frame of mind to make things happen....best wishes dear Carrie..hope your heart is smiling.
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