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President Trump

Let’s give credit where credit is due.
Trump’s accomplishments—I’ll give a few—
should be mentioned today,
so to those who naysay,
let me offer a positive view.

Now the jobless rate’s pleasingly low:
January nineteen---4-point-0.
Our economy’s good,
and improving. All should
see we’ve risen above status quo.

College grads hit the jackpot last year,
for the job market stats made them cheer.
In his plans he’s not slack.
He’s brought many jobs back
and helped generate companies here.

Though new tax laws won’t help everyone,
they’ll help millions. When all’s said and done,
there’s been no perfect law
and no man without flaw
in the White House—nor under the sun!*

Note: I do NOT LIKE his personality, his mouth, but he's accomplished some
good for the U.S.


February 2, 2019, entered in Anthony Slausin's President Trump
Poetry Contest

Stanza 2: data.bls.com (U.S. Dept. of Labor Report, Feb. 2, 2019)

Stanza 3: cbsnews.com (May 17, 2018)
 
                conservativedailypost.com (Jan. 10, 2017, Martin Walsh article   
                says Ford, U.S. Steel, and others agreed to bring over one million 
                jobs back the U.S.)
 
Stanza 4: *nor under the sun—except Jesus


November 19, 2020
entered in the Out on a Lim Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 4:54 AM
many congrats janice a fine string of limericks:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Congratulations, Janice, for your wonderful win in Joseph's contest with your well-penned limerick.. ~Susan
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Thanks so much, Susan. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:15 PM
I really like how you showed the positive which some people do not seem to see. I do not back either party, and at first I hated seeing him in the White House, but I was actually pleased with the way my taxes decreased. I am sure some actually benefited when he was president. Both sides have their good and bad. Congrats. I really like this.
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:48 AM
I REALLY appreciate this encouragement, Andrea!! I needed it. Janice
May Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Very nicely done Janice, Congrats on your win
Proxenos Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Well penned Suzanne, congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Janice
Delaney Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Well written and thoughtful write, Janice: When you think of it, if we were all judged on our personalities and not our job performance perhaps there would be many out of a job. Good angle on your poem. SuZ
Canerdy Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 7:15 PM
You make a good point, SuZ! Thanks so much for the positive comment. Janice
Hawley Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 10:06 AM
Nice easy read. Good job.
Canerdy Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Thanks so much, Miranda. Janice
Sands Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Canerdy Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Janice
Proxenos Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Hi Janice, Best for a win - Trump was voted in after all! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 3:06 PM
very well metered limericks these are. I think I see a top winner here!!! (I am not sure he has really affected any of the good stuff. I feel like we would have been the same no matter what. thank god nothing horrible has happened yet at least!!)
Canerdy Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I worked hard on this one! I think good economy and low unemployment rates ARE "good stuff." I was careful to choose topics over which there was the LEAST uncertainty. I don't like his mouth and his personality. I consider him to be his own worst enemy, but he has made improvements in our country. Again--THANK you for the great compliment to my poem!! :-) Janice
Y. Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Hi Janice, You did your homework with this well written piece.You met the requirements and so much more, this is such a positive write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. I REALLY worked on this one. There's been so much disagreement about what he has and has not done, so I was selective! Janice
One Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:39 AM
He is still an idiot though lol... You did a good poem on his behalf..
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Thanks , S.O. Janice
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