Prelude To a Misty Morning

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It happened on a misty morning collaboration contest, sponsored by Charlie Messina

September 18, 2023 - Second verse written by Charlie

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Last night in the garden, I bent on one knee, Proposed to my love and she agreed to marry me. I picked a crimson rose and placed it in her hand, the hand that would soon wear my wedding band. Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone

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Daniel Turner

Date: 9/18/2023 6:46:00 PM

You always know just what to write Lin. This is very romantic. Hoping you are well dear friend:)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/18/2023 6:54:00 PM

Hi Danny. Having you make such wonderful comments would make me feel better if I was still not over Covid. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2023 7:53:00 AM

aww Lin so beautiful and romantic, I struggle with romantic poems - poop poems are more my style, i must look at the contest theme and see if anything comes to me, hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/18/2023 7:58:00 AM

You can skillfully write any kind of poetry you choose. That poop crown comes off your head now and again. Thank you for finding romance in my entry for Charlie's contest.