Prelude

Canopy’s aperture, spilled light’s nuance, tinted, as my eyes arrested, to attest fall’s saga… A tree proclivity, had me stalled in Ashland, watching the leaves succumb, leaving stark limbs barren… Those with temerity, plunged at high speed, head first Others spun dizzily, tornado-bewildered… Few flew in gradients, of sideways-sloped descent: wishes on air sustained, just a little longer… Some seemed to ride gentle, invisible, sleep-chutes, touching down easily, with wizened acceptance… My marrow slowly chilled, as damping moisture crept But cheer was soon bubbling, as merry maples fell: swaying in zigs and zags, frolics of to and fro, to come to a smooth rest, on the glassy brook’s face Alighting sans ripples, their fate in water’s hold: floating on a mirror, reflecting their past life, ere being swept by currents, to their next journey’s start…
(11/4/18 - Repost of Ashland Autumn for P contest hosted by Constance la France)
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Calasibetta Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Dear Susan, a lovely and descriptive picture of autumn filled with the swift movement of this time of year. Blessings, Paulette
Woodrow Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Thank you :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Very lovely Susan - a portrait of fall in autumnal observation with lovely images. Congratulations for you win. The southernmost part of Oregon is truly magnificent in the fall.
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Soup mail.
Woodrow Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 2:20 PM
thank you ...yes, it was a lovely stop returning from Portland a few years back :)
La France Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Susan, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this lovely poem, I find it quite beautiful well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Woodrow Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 2:20 PM
thanks for hosting :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 10:52 PM
wow what a beauty and very well placed, Susan. congrats on your win.
Woodrow Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Peck Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Your poem is beautiful and the imagery is great. The leaves would surely thank you. :) And congratulation on first place!!
Woodrow Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Thank you :)
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 12:48 PM
the most vivid descriptive autumnal poem I.ve had the joy to read, your word choice is simply sublime Susan, Many congratulations on your win, a HUGE fave for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Woodrow Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Thank you very much Jan So glad you enjoyed it :)
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