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Predators

In moonlit dunes where silence creeps, My past still hisses in my sleep The owl above with spectral stare The scorpion’s sting, a desert’s dare They watched, I waited, lips held tight And struck with fury skinned in night The mouse so small, so quick, took flight, And fell beneath my fang's sharp bite By noon the rat, its frantic dash, A silent snap, a final flash A squirrel in the night, it found my hood In it's neck my venom, nails driven to wood I, the sly one, a cobra dines alone, Taking what’s mine, with skills honed They vanish, twitching, into dust My hunger’s law, in silence trust

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Date: 4/8/2025 10:32:00 PM
Very Ingenius idea, A.S. I love how the light works in your poetry. I agree with Lin.
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Date: 4/9/2025 9:47:00 AM
There is always room for light ;) One of my rare contest entries. Thank you Paige for inspiring me with your creativity and for allowing me to experience the world through your unique lens. Stay as you are always, your friend A.S.
Date: 4/8/2025 6:47:00 PM
Your poetry is worthy of much more attention than it’s receiving, Scorpio. What a grand idea to be the snake.
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Date: 4/9/2025 9:40:00 AM
"Those who focus on attention never attain ascension, those who live for ascension don't have time for attention." Not one of my quotes but certainly one I attempt to live by. Your praise is so thoughtful and warming Lin! Thank You!! A.S.

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