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Precious and Few

my new adidas running shoes blue bell bottom jeans soft pink angora sweater and ribbon in my hair a stroke of blue shadow on my eyes touch of blush on the cheekbones perfume cachet smelling pretty rushing out to the school dance I’ll hang out at the punchbowl I’ve got my heart set on a beau he’s been flirting with me in chemistry class all year there’s nothing I’d like better than to dance the whole night long and hear him call me sweetheart as I can hardly breathe and the band will play their rendition of the magical hit ‘Precious and Few’ fondly close under dimmest of lights maybe just maybe we’ll get to steal a kiss Submitted on March 1, 2020 for contest DANCE WITH ME sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/7/2020 9:59:00 PM
I loved the song precious and few! Pretty imagery! Congratulations, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/2/2020 7:23:00 PM
how "precious and few are those moment we two can share"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/3/2020 9:47:00 AM
Yes absolutely, you remember it well, Timothy. Thanks for your visit and lovely contribution. LOL
Date: 3/1/2020 6:23:00 PM
Aw beautiful, it was a great song, brings back some good memories. Enjoyed.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2020 8:44:00 PM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2020 3:59:00 PM
Aw...'Precious and few are the moments we can share...' Sure remember that one! Thanks for the waltz down memory lane. Cheers, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2020 6:15:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

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